Parks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更自然並且語法正確。主句應直接回答問題，然後用一兩句具體細節支持。注意時態一致（過去式），修正單詞和短語（例如“going to parks”，“go to a track/run”，“doing exercise”應為“did exercises”）。避免冗長或重複。

例: Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child. I was very active, so I often went to the park with my family to run on the track and play games like tag.

提案: 回答要簡潔並說明原因，注意語法和代詞使用（例如不要用“your park”指一般公園）。保持句子數量不超過五句，使用連接詞（for example, because, so）使語意連貫。避免不必要細節如“taking a bath after”。

例: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they are convenient for my daily exercise routine. I usually jog there in the mornings and find the fresh air very refreshing.

提案: 回答要直接並具體說明原因與偏好。修正詞語搭配（例如“around my living area/neighbourhood”，“lined with trees and flowers”，“offers a refreshing environment”）。用連接詞連接意見與細節，保持簡潔。

例: Yes, I would. I think more parks in my neighbourhood would be great because I like exercising outdoors in the morning. I prefer parks that are lined with trees and flowers because they feel refreshing and peaceful.

提案: 回答要現實且具體。可以提到某種類型的公園（例如動物園、國家公園），並解釋原因。注意語法（數、時態、形容詞搭配），例如“parks that have many large animals and beautiful plants”。避免過於幻想化的描述。

例: Yes, I would love to visit a national park in the future because I enjoy wildlife and nature. For example, I want to see large animals and diverse plant life in a peaceful, well-preserved park.

× Yes, I really like going park as a child because I was a very active person when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I really liked going to parks as a child because I was a very active person when I was a kid.

问题类型：可数名词单复数错误。原句中“going park”缺少介词“to”且“park”应使用复数或泛指单数结构。因为说的是“去公园”这一类活动，应使用复数“parks”或结构“going to the park(s)”。另外时态应与“as a child”保持过去式，因此将“like”改为过去式“liked”。建议：使用“going to parks”或“going to the park”并将动词时态与时间状语一致。

× I always go to a tray to have a run and doing exercise with my family.

✓ I always went to a nearby park to have a run and do exercise with my family.

问题类型：动词+ -ing 形式/动词形式错误。原句中使用了混合形式“go... and doing”，结构不平行且“tray”拼写错误，且语境为过去应使用过去式“went”。建议将并列动词保持相同形式（both base form or both -ing），在此改为过去式并保持不带 -ing 的并列结构：“went... to... and do...”。同时将“tray”改为正确词“park”或“nearby park”。

× Yes, of course. Not only because I have different games and peripherals, it also because I'm a highly disciplined person with a regular routine while always going are always doing exercise in your park and taking a bath after.

✓ Yes, of course. Not only because I have different games and equipment, but also because I'm a highly disciplined person with a regular routine: I always exercise in the park and take a shower afterwards.

问题类型：现在时/句子结构和词语使用错误。句子中时态混乱、连词使用错误（缺少“but”）、词汇不当（“peripherals”通常指电脑外设，改为“equipment”），还出现“going are always doing”这种语法错误，代词“your park”不符合上下文应为“the park”或“a park”。建议：使用固定连接结构“not only ... but also ...”，动词时态统一用一般现在时描述习惯性动作，并用简单平行结构“always exercise... and take...”来表达。

× Yes, of course I want to see some other park around my living network.

✓ Yes, of course I want to see some other parks around where I live.

问题类型：单复数问题和介词搭配。原句“some other park”在表达希望看到多个公园时应使用复数“parks”；“living network”是错误搭配，应使用“where I live”或“my neighborhood”。建议：用“parks”或改用“another park”如果只指一个，并使用正确表达地点的词组。

× Personally, I have a habit that I would do exercise in the morning at the park and I really like to visit a park that line with different trees and flowers and other green plants offerings a highly refreshing and comfortable environment.

✓ Personally, I have a habit of doing exercise in the morning at the park, and I really like visiting parks that are lined with different trees, flowers and other green plants, offering a very refreshing and comfortable environment.

问题类型：动词+ -ing 形式、动词时态和句子结构错误。原句中“have a habit that I would do”不自然，习惯表达应为“have a habit of doing”；并列动词形式要统一（doing / visiting），且“line with”应为被动或完成式“lined with”；“offerings”用法错误，改为现在分词“offering”作后置定语修饰“parks”。建议：使用固定搭配“have a habit of doing”，保持动词形式一致，使用“lined with”以及“offering”来表达描述。

× Yes, absolutely, because I'm a movie lover and I have watched the movie Jurassic Park many times and one day I want to visit a park that have many enormous animals and an amazing plants and have a very comfortable atmosphere.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I'm a movie lover and I have watched the movie Jurassic Park many times, and one day I want to visit a park that has many enormous animals and amazing plants and has a very comfortable atmosphere.

问题类型：单复数和主谓一致。原句中“a park that have”主谓不一致，应为“that has”；“an amazing plants”冠词与复数不匹配，应为“amazing plants”或“an amazing plant（单数）”。此外句子连接混乱，时态与愿望表达可保留一般现在用于习惯和将来愿望。建议：保证主语与动词一致（singular subject 用 singular verb），冠词与名词数一致，清晰分段或用适当连词。