Parks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence, add one or two brief supporting details, and use a linking word if you add details. Keep it natural and under five sentences. For example, state whether you liked parks, say why, and give a short specific example.

例: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they had big playgrounds and ponds to feed the ducks. For instance, I used to play on the swings every weekend and have picnics with my family.

提案: Again you repeated the question instead of answering. Give a direct response (yes/no or sometimes), then support it with a reason and a short example. Use a linking word such as ‘because’ or ‘so’ to connect ideas and make the reply coherent.

例: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they help me relax and exercise. For example, I often jog there in the mornings and sit under a tree to read.

提案: You repeated the examiner’s words instead of giving an opinion. Provide a clear opinion (yes/no/maybe) followed by reasons and one specific detail. Use linking words like ‘because’, ‘so’, or ‘however’ to make the answer flow naturally.

例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because green spaces improve air quality and offer places for families to relax. For example, a new park in my neighborhood would be great for children to play and for community events.

提案: The answer repeated the examiner’s question rather than answering it. Improve by naming a specific park (or type of park), explaining why you want to visit, and giving a brief detail about what you would do there. Keep it concise and coherent using linking words such as ‘because’ or ‘so’.

例: Yes, I would like to visit the central botanical garden next year because it has rare plants and beautiful themed sections. I plan to take photos of the flowers and join a guided tour to learn about the plants.

× Did you like going to park as a child?

✓ Did you like going to parks as a child?

The noun 'park' is a countable singular noun and needs an article or plural form. The question asks generally about visiting parks in childhood, so plural 'parks' matches the intent and the examiner's original. Use plural for general habitual activities. Suggestion: use 'parks' for general activities, or 'the park' if referring to a specific park.' ,

× Do you still like going to park now?

✓ Do you still like going to parks now?

Same issue: 'park' is a countable noun and needs an article or plural form. The question is general about going to parks, so plural 'parks' is correct. Suggestion: use 'parks' for general meaning or 'the park' if a specific park is meant.' ,

× Would you like to see more parks in your city?

✓ Would you like to see more parks in your city?

This sentence is grammatically correct. It uses plural 'parks' appropriately and the modal 'would' correctly expresses preference.' ,

× Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

✓ Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

This sentence is grammatically correct. 'Are there any parks' correctly uses 'there be' structure and plural noun for general inquiry.' }]}{