Parks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你在回答时只是重复了考官的问题，未给出任何信息。请直接回答问题并补充1–2个具体细节（例如你喜欢做什么、谁陪你、为什么喜欢），注意句子不超过5句并使用连接词使回答连贯。

例: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often played on the swings and had picnics with my family, which made those visits very fun. Because the parks were close to my home, I went there almost every weekend.

提案: 你只是重复了问题而没有回答。请给出直接肯定或否定的观点，并用1–2个具体理由或例子支持，例如运动、放松或社交。使用连接词如“because”或“so”来衔接句子。

例: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they are a great place to relax and exercise. For example, I often jog there in the mornings and sometimes meet friends for a coffee afterward.

提案: 回答再次只是重复问题且有语法错误（多余的“me”）。请先直接回答（Yes/No），然后给出具体原因或期望（如方便居民、改善环境或增加儿童活动空间），用连接词如“because”或“so”.

例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide green space for relaxation and improve air quality. More parks would also give families and children safer places to play.

提案: 你没有给出任何回答内容。请直接说出你想去的具体公园或类型，并说明原因或计划（例如参观特色园区、参加活动或带家人），保持句子简洁并使用连接词。

例: Yes, I would like to visit the botanical garden next month because it has rare plant collections and seasonal flower displays. I plan to go with my sister and take photos of the flowers.

× Would you like to me more parks in your city?

✓ Would you like to see more parks in your city?

学生句子中多了“me”，导致结构不正确。原句意为“你想在你们城市看到更多公园吗？”，正确的动词搭配是“would like to see”。建议去掉多余的“me”，并使用“see”来表达“看到/参观”。（简明建议：把“me”删掉，使用“see”。）