Parks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response shows pronunciation problems and is not an answer to the question. Give a clear, direct answer (yes/no) with a brief reason and one supporting detail. Keep it natural and concise, up to 3–4 short sentences. Use correct vocabulary (park, child) and simple linking words like 'because' or 'and'.

例: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child because they had playgrounds and open space to run. I often went there with my family and friends, and we played games or had picnics. Those visits helped me feel active and happy.

提案: The student repeated the question instead of answering and shows grammar issues. Respond directly with a topic sentence (Yes/No), then add one or two supporting details using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Use correct verb forms (I still like going to parks).

例: Yes, I still like going to parks because they are peaceful and good for exercise. For example, I often walk there in the morning to relax and stay fit.

提案: Again you repeated the examiner's question instead of giving your opinion. State your view clearly (Yes/No/Maybe) and give a specific reason or consequence. Use linking words such as 'because', 'so', or 'therefore' to connect ideas and make the answer coherent.

例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because there is limited green space in some neighborhoods. More parks would provide places for children to play and for people to exercise, which would improve community health.

提案: The answer is unclear and does not respond to the question; pronunciation and word choice are incorrect (paths/factory). Understand the question and give a clear personal plan or desire. Use a topic sentence and one specific example of a park you want to visit, with a brief reason using linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

例: Yes, I would like to visit the central botanical garden next year because it has many rare plants and beautiful walking trails. I hope to go there with friends and take photos of the flowers.

× Did you like a like going to pask at a chill?

✓ Did you like going to parks as a child?

The student sentence has multiple issues: incorrect word choice ('a like', 'pask', 'chill') and wrong word order. This is a sentence structure error because extra and incorrect words break the sentence. Corrected to match the examiner's question using proper nouns and order. Suggestion: remove redundant words, use correct vocabulary ('parks', 'child'), and follow the standard question form 'Did you like going to...?'.

× Do you still like go into park now?

✓ Do you still like going to parks now?

The verb following 'like' should be in the -ing form (present participle), so 'go' must be 'going'. Also preposition and article are incorrect: use 'to parks' or 'to the park' depending on singular/plural. Suggestion: use 'like + -ing' and correct preposition: 'going to parks' or 'going to the park'.

× Would you like to see more parks in your city?

✓ Would you like to see more parks in your city?

This sentence is already correct. It correctly uses the modal 'would' plus base verb 'like' and a proper noun phrase. No grammatical changes required.

× Are there any paths you want to go to in the factory?

✓ Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

The student used wrong words ('paths', 'factory') that change meaning and used an odd location. The main grammatical issue is incorrect preposition/location choice; also meaning deviates from the examiner's question. Corrected to match the examiner's intended question. Suggestion: use the same noun ('parks') and phrase 'in the future' to answer the examiner's question, and keep 'go to' when talking about visiting places.