Parks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question directly with a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar (past tense), and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repeating the examiner's words and unnecessary words like "I chilled."

例: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often played on the swings and had picnics with my family, which made weekends very fun. Because the parks were close to my home, I could visit them almost every weekend.

提案: Respond directly and use the present tense. Provide a short reason and one specific example, using linking words to connect ideas. Do not repeat the examiner’s question back to them.

例: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks now because they are peaceful and good for exercise. For example, I usually walk there twice a week and sometimes read on a bench while listening to birds.

提案: Understand the question and answer it directly. Use proper vocabulary ("parks" not "parking") and give a clear opinion with one reason and an example. Use linking words to show cause or contrast.

例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide space for families. For instance, if there were a new park near my neighborhood, children would have a safe place to play.

提案: Clarify the tense and meaning: use future tense to talk about plans. Answer directly and name a specific park or type of park you want to visit, and explain why with a brief reason. Keep responses concise and grammatically correct.

例: Yes, I want to visit the National Botanical Garden next year because I enjoy seeing rare plants and taking photographs. If I go, I plan to spend a whole afternoon exploring the collections and learning about different species.

× Did you like going to park? And I chilled.

✓ Did you like going to parks? And I relaxed.

The first clause uses a countable noun 'park' that needs a plural or an article; the question asks about parks in general, so 'parks' is appropriate (Grammar problem type ID 22). The second clause 'I chilled' is informal and not natural in this context; 'I relaxed' or 'I used to relax' fits better. Suggestion: use 'parks' for general habitual action and use 'relaxed' for clear past action.

× Do you still like going to park now?

✓ Do you still like going to parks now?

'Park' is a countable noun. When speaking about parks in general, use the plural 'parks' (Grammar problem type ID 22). Alternatively, 'the park' would refer to a specific park. Suggestion: use 'parks' to ask about the activity in general.

× What world would you like to see more parking in your city?

✓ Would you like to see more parks in your city?

The original sentence has multiple issues: wrong word choice ('world' instead of 'would' or unnecessary), 'parking' (the act of parking) instead of 'parks' (green public spaces), and incorrect word order. This is a sentence structure and word choice error (Grammar problem type ID 26). Suggestion: Follow the question pattern 'Would you like to see more parks in your city?' to clearly ask about adding parks.

× Are there any park you were born to going to the future?

✓ Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Multiple errors: 'park' should be plural 'parks' when asking generally (Grammar problem type ID 22). 'You were born to going' is incorrect verb structure and irrelevant; the intended meaning is 'you want to go'. Use 'want to go' and the infinitive 'to go to' with 'in the future' placed at the end. Suggestion: Use 'Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?' for a natural question.