Parks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a complete sentence that directly answers the question and add one brief reason or memory to make it more natural and informative. Keep it under five sentences and use linking words if you add details.

例: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child because I loved playing on the swings and exploring the trees.

提案: Correct grammar (use present continuous or simple present correctly) and combine short fragments into coherent sentences. Use a topic sentence plus one or two specific supporting details linked with words like "because" or "so". Keep it concise.

例: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because I like relaxing there and taking walks with my friends, which helps me unwind after a busy week.

提案: Use correct verbs and clearer reasons. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words such as "because" or "so". Mention concrete benefits (e.g. exercise, scenery, socializing).

例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide pleasant scenery, places to exercise, and areas where friends can meet and relax.

提案: Answer in a full sentence, correct grammar and avoid unrelated words. State the park or city clearly and give a specific reason why you want to go, using linking words like "because". Keep it under five sentences.

例: Yes, I would like to visit parks in London in the future because they are famous for their beautiful gardens and historical features, such as those in Hyde Park and Kew Gardens.

× Yes, I'm still like going to park now.

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks now.

The verb 'like' should not be used with 'be' in 'I'm still like'; use simple present 'I still like' for present habits. Also 'park' should be plural or take an article: 'parks' fits the context of general preference. Suggestion: use simple present for habits: 'I still like going to parks.'

× Right now I'm still. Interested to view and to chill in the park while walking with my friends.

✓ Right now I'm still interested in viewing and chilling in the park while walking with my friends.

Adjective 'interested' requires the preposition 'in' followed by a gerund, not 'to' plus base verb. Use gerunds 'viewing' and 'chilling' or 'looking around' and 'relaxing'. Also remove the stray period after 'still.'

× Yes, I admire to see many parts on my city because it's a fun, it's a good view and happy with my friends while walking there.

✓ Yes, I like to see many parks in my city because they're fun, have good views, and I am happy with my friends while walking there.

Several preposition and word-choice errors: 'admire to see' is incorrect; use 'like to see' or 'enjoy seeing.' 'Parts on my city' should be 'parks in my city.' 'It's a fun, it's a good view and happy' has subject-verb and adjective issues; use plural 'they're' and separate clauses: 'they're fun, they have good views, and I am happy...' Use 'in' for location: 'in my city.'

× Yes, I like go to park in London because this is a popular and very beautiful and. Person.

✓ Yes, I would like to go to a park in London because it is very popular and beautiful.

'Like go' should be 'like to go' or 'would like to go' — use infinitive. 'Park in London' needs an article 'a park.' 'This is a popular and very beautiful and. Person.' is ungrammatical; likely meant 'it is very popular and beautiful.' Remove 'person' and extra conjunctions. Use 'would like' for future desire: 'I would like to go to a park in London because it is very popular and beautiful.'