Parks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời quá ngắn, thiếu nội dung hỗ trợ và không tự nhiên. Theo quy tắc, cần có câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp rồi thêm chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: lý do, mô tả hoạt động, so sánh) dùng liên từ nếu cần. Hãy mở rộng lên 2–4 câu, tránh chỉ nói 'No'.

例: Not really. When I was a child I rarely went to parks because my family lived in a small town without many green spaces. Instead, I played at home with my cousins or visited my grandparents, so parks were not part of my childhood routine.

提案: Câu trả lời là một câu đơn, thiếu giải thích và chi tiết cụ thể. Nên trả lời trực tiếp rồi bổ sung lý do ngắn gọn và ví dụ, sử dụng liên từ để mạch lạc (for example, because, although).

例: Not really. I don't go to parks much nowadays because I prefer indoor activities like going to the gym or reading at a café. However, if the weather is nice I might visit a park for a short walk.

提案: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và không thuyết phục. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp rồi phát triển ý bằng lý do hoặc so sánh (for instance, we already have enough green spaces / we need other facilities). Dùng 2–3 câu để thể hiện quan điểm rõ ràng.

例: I wouldn't say so. I think our city already has several well-maintained parks, and what we need more are playgrounds and sports facilities for young people. Adding benches and lighting would improve the existing parks instead of building new ones.

提案: Câu trả lời sai ngữ pháp và không đầy đủ (nên dùng 'No, I don't' hoặc 'No, there aren't any'). Thiếu thông tin bổ sung như lý do hoặc điều kiện khiến bạn sẽ/có thể đi. Hãy sửa ngữ pháp và mở rộng thành 2–3 câu với chi tiết cụ thể.

例: No, there aren't any particular parks I plan to visit. I usually choose activities based on my schedule, and unless a friend suggests a specific park event I don't make future plans to go to one.

× No, I didn't.

✓ No, I didn't.

The sentence 'No, I didn't.' correctly uses the past tense auxiliary and pronoun to answer 'Did you like going to parks as a child?' No change needed. Suggestion: none - answer is grammatically correct.

× No, I don't.

✓ No, I don't.

The response 'No, I don't.' correctly uses the present simple negative form to answer 'Do you still like going to parks now?' No change needed. Suggestion: none - answer is grammatically correct.

× No.

✓ No, I wouldn't.

The question 'Would you like to see more parks in your city?' uses the modal 'would' to ask about preference. A bare 'No.' is acceptable in casual speech but to match tense and politeness the full response should be 'No, I wouldn't.' Suggestion: use the modal verb in the answer to mirror the question's structure.

× No, I am not.

✓ No, I don't.

The question 'Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?' asks about desire using 'want' (present simple). The reply 'No, I am not.' is incorrect because 'am' does not match 'want'. The correct short reply is 'No, I don't.' or 'No, I don't want to.' Suggestion: match the auxiliary to the main verb in the question: use 'do' for 'want'.