Parks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response is not an answer but a repetition of the examiner’s question with a pronunciation error (“barks” instead of “parks”). To improve: answer directly with a topic sentence, give 1–2 supporting details, and keep it natural and concise. Also focus on accurate pronunciation of key words. For example, say “parks” with a clear /p/ and /k/ sounds. Use linking words like “because” to add reasons.

例: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because there were playgrounds and wide open spaces to run around. For example, I often played on the swings with my friends and had picnics with my family.

提案: This is a verbatim repetition of the question and does not respond. Provide a direct topic sentence (yes/no or sometimes), then add a specific reason and a brief example. Keep it under five sentences and use linking words such as “because” or “however.”

例: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they help me relax and exercise. For instance, I usually jog there twice a week and sometimes meet friends for a walk.

提案: Again you repeated the question instead of answering. Give a clear opinion (yes/no/to some extent), explain why with a specific reason, and, if possible, mention a concrete benefit or example. Use linking words like “because” or “so” to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because green spaces improve air quality and provide places for community activities. For example, a new park near my neighborhood would be useful for families and for people to exercise.

提案: This is another repetition rather than an answer. Respond with a clear statement about whether you have specific parks in mind, give one or two specific examples, and explain briefly why you want to visit them. Use linking words such as “for example” or “because.”

例: Yes, I would like to visit the large botanical garden in the city next year because I enjoy seeing different plant species and taking photos. For example, I hope to go in spring when the flowers are in bloom.

× Do you like going to barks as a child?

✓ Did you like going to parks as a child?

The student used 'barks' (tree coverings) instead of 'parks' (recreational areas) and also used present simple 'Do you like' which is incorrect for asking about past preferences. The examiner's question asks about childhood (past), so the correct auxiliary is 'did' with the base verb: 'Did you like going to parks as a child?'. Suggestion: use the past auxiliary 'did' for past habits and ensure correct word choice 'parks'.

× Do you still like going to parks now?

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks now.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. The sentence as written is a question, not an answer. To respond, use a statement that fits present tense: 'Yes, I still like going to parks now.' Suggestion: when asked a yes/no question, answer with a statement matching the question's tense and add reasons if required.

× Would you like to see more parks in your city?

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of giving an answer. The correct response should be a statement using the conditional 'would' to match the question: 'I would like...' Suggestion: convert the modal question into a declarative answer, e.g., 'Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city.'

× Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

✓ Yes, there are some parks I want to visit in the future.

The student repeated the examiner's question rather than answering. Also, 'want to go to' is acceptable but 'visit' is more natural here. Use a statement in present tense expressing future intent: 'I want to visit' or 'there are some parks I want to visit.' Suggestion: answer questions with a full declarative sentence that matches tense and meaning, e.g., 'Yes, there are some parks I want to visit in the future.'