Parks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你没有真正回答考官的问题，而是重复了问题。请直接给出一个主题句来表达你的经历或态度，然后用一到两句具体细节支持，例如提到常去的活动或和谁一起去。句子不要超过五句，使用连接词（例如 because, so, and）使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child because they were a place to play with my friends. For example, we often played football and fed the ducks by the pond. I also remember having picnics with my family on weekends.

提案: 你再次只是重复问题，未提供任何回答。请直接说明现在是否喜欢去公园，随后用一两句具体原因或例子来支持你的观点，使用连接词（such as, because, however）使句子流畅。注意长度不超过五句。

例: Yes, I still like going to parks because they help me relax and exercise. For instance, I usually go jogging there twice a week and sometimes read a book on a bench. I also enjoy watching families and children playing.

提案: 你依然只是重复了考官的问题，未表明立场或理由。请明确回答（Yes/No）并给出具体理由或比较，例如讨论空气质量、休闲空间或城市规划相关的好处或缺点，并用连接词（because, so, therefore）连接观点与细节。

例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide space for recreation. For example, more parks would make it easier for residents to exercise and relax without traveling far. They could also reduce noise and pollution in crowded neighborhoods.

提案: 你的回答仍是重复问题，并且有发音/拼写错误（perks→parks）。请直接回答是否有具体的公园想去，并给出理由和具体细节，例如公园的位置、特色或计划的活动。使用一到两句支持性细节并用连接词（for example, because）增强连贯性。

例: Yes, I would like to visit the botanical garden in the city center because it has many rare plants and peaceful walking paths. For example, I plan to go there next spring to see the cherry blossoms and take photos.

× Are there any perks you want to go to in your future?

✓ Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

该句把“parks”（公园）误写为“perks”（福利/好处），属于词汇用错。根据上下文考官在问关于公园（parks）的情况，正确单词应为parks。此外，短语“in the future”比“in your future”更符合常用表达。建议注意听写与拼写，遇到不确定的单词可回想语境并检查常见拼写差异（如ar/er）。建议多做听写练习并复习易混淆词的拼写。