Parks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your reply doesn't address the question. Start with a clear topic sentence (yes/no or a brief statement) and add one or two specific details about memories or activities, using linking words if needed. Keep it natural and concise.

例: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. For example, I often played on the swings and had picnics with my family, which made those weekends very special.

提案: Your answer is incomplete. Give a full sentence that states whether you still like parks, then add a supporting detail or reason. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'because of' to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they are peaceful and good for exercise; for instance, I walk there every morning to relax and stay fit.

提案: A one-word response is acceptable but too short. Expand with a brief reason or example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to make your reply coherent and informative.

例: Absolutely, I would like to see more parks because they improve air quality and provide safe places for children to play, so they would enhance community life.

提案: Your reply is unrelated to the question. Answer directly by naming a park you want to visit or describing the type of park, then give a reason or plan. Keep it concise and specific.

例: Yes, I want to visit the new riverside park next month because I heard it has a beautiful trail and a large lake where I can go boating.

× Nice to meet you.

✓ It's nice to meet you.

The student's reply 'Nice to meet you.' is a fragment lacking a subject and auxiliary verb for a complete sentence in this context. The examiner asked about childhood parks; an appropriate response should be a complete sentence or a short clause that fits the question. Adding the subject and verb ('It is' contracted to 'It's') makes the phrase a grammatically complete polite response. Suggestion: Use 'It's nice to meet you.' or better, answer the question directly (e.g., 'Yes, I liked going to parks when I was a child.').

× Yes, I.

✓ Yes, I do.

The student answered 'Yes, I.' which is incomplete because the auxiliary verb required for the present simple question 'Do you still like...' is missing. The correct short response uses the auxiliary 'do' to match the question's structure: 'Yes, I do.' Suggestion: Use the appropriate auxiliary or repeat the verb in full (e.g., 'Yes, I still like going to parks.').

× Absolutely.

✓ Absolutely, I would.

The single-word reply 'Absolutely.' is not wrong by itself in casual speech, but in this exam context the question 'Would you like to see more parks in your city?' expects a polite modal response. A fuller reply such as 'Absolutely, I would.' or 'Yes, I would like that.' fits the modal 'would' and completes the sentence. Suggestion: Use 'Yes, I would' or 'Yes, I would like that.' to match the modal verb in the question.

× Nice to meet you.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit some parks in the future.

Again 'Nice to meet you.' is unrelated and is a fragment rather than an answer to 'Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?'. The response should address future intention; using 'would like to' or 'want to' expresses that. Suggestion: Answer directly with a complete sentence that uses future modality (e.g., 'Yes, I would like to visit some parks in the future.' or 'Yes, I want to visit the new city park.').