Parks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response is unintelligible and appears to repeat the examiner's question with incorrect grammar. For Part 1 you should give a direct short answer (topic sentence) and one or two supporting details. Use correct tense and word order. For example, start with “Yes, I did” or “No, I didn’t,” then add a reason or a brief memory using linking words like “because” or “for example.”

例: Yes, I did. I loved going to parks as a child because there was a big playground where I could climb and play with friends.

提案: Your reply repeats the examiner’s question and uses incorrect word forms. Give a clear personal answer and a specific reason. Use present tense and a linking word such as “because” or “so.” Keep it concise (max 4–5 sentences).

例: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because I like walking and relaxing in nature, and they are a good place to meet friends.

提案: You responded with a confused repetition and didn’t answer the question. Answer directly with “Yes” or “No” and give a clear reason or example. Mention specifics (e.g., reasons such as health, green space, children's play areas) and use linking words like “because” or “so that.”

例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because many neighborhoods lack green spaces, and new parks would provide places for exercise and family activities.

提案: This repeats the examiner’s question and uses informal language (“wanna”). Provide a direct answer about a specific park or type of park you want to visit, and give a brief reason. Use future tense or modal verbs (e.g., “I would like to visit…” or “I want to go to…”).

例: I would like to visit the large botanical garden near the city next year because I enjoy seeing different plants and taking photos.

× Did you like going to park the child?

✓ Did you like going to parks as a child?

The original sentence omits the plural form and misplaces the article. The intended meaning asks about going to parks during childhood. Use the plural 'parks' and the phrase 'as a child' to match the examiner's question. Suggestion: use 'parks' (plural) or 'the park' and 'as a child' depending on meaning. Grammar problem type ID:17

× Do you still like going to park now?

✓ Do you still like going to parks now?

The noun 'park' should be plural 'parks' to match the general activity of visiting parks, or use the article 'the' for a specific park. Also keeping 'now' is fine. Suggestion: use 'parks' for general habits or 'the park' for a specific place. Grammar problem type ID:17

× What would you like? Would you like to see more parks in your city?

✓ Would you like to see more parks in your city?

The student's first sentence 'What would you like?' is unnecessary and repeats the question, creating awkward structure. Remove the redundant sentence to directly answer the examiner's question. Suggestion: respond directly to the examiner's prompt. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Are there any parks you wanna go in the future?

✓ Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

'wanna' is informal spoken slang and not appropriate in standard written grammar. Additionally, the verb phrase requires the preposition 'to' after 'go'. Place 'to' at the end: 'go to'. Suggestion: use 'want to' instead of 'wanna' and include the preposition 'to'. Grammar problem type ID:4