Parks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response repeats the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a clear, direct topic sentence stating whether you liked parks, then add one or two specific supporting details. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences). Use linking words like "because" or "and" to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they were places where I could run around and play with my friends. For example, we often had picnics under big trees and played games like tag, which made those afternoons memorable.

提案: Again, you repeated the question instead of answering. Respond directly (Yes/No) and give a reason or brief example. Use linking words such as "still" and "because" to show continuity or change.

例: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they offer a peaceful break from city life. For instance, I often go for a short walk there to relax and exercise after work.

提案: You echoed the examiner instead of giving your opinion. State your preference clearly (Yes/No/Maybe) and support it with a specific reason or consequence. Use linking words like "because", "so", or "therefore" to make your answer coherent.

例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because we need more green spaces for families and exercise. More parks would also improve air quality and provide safe places for children to play.

提案: Your response is unclear and repeats the question with grammar errors. Answer clearly by naming a park or type of park you want to visit and give a reason or plan. Keep sentences concise and use linking words like "for example" or "because" to add detail.

例: Yes, I would like to visit the new riverside park that recently opened because it has cycling paths and a large botanical garden. For example, next month I plan to go there with friends to try the cycling route and see the flower displays.

× Did you like a going to park as a child?

✓ Did you like going to parks as a child?

The sentence has two errors: the unnecessary article 'a' before the gerund phrase and the singular 'park' where the examiner used the plural 'parks'. According to the prompt question, use plural 'parks' to match meaning. Remove the article 'a' because 'going to parks' is a general activity and 'going' should not be preceded by 'a'. Suggestion: say 'Did you like going to parks as a child?' to be grammatical and natural.

× Do you still like going to the park?

✓ Do you still like going to parks now?

The examiner asked 'Do you still like going to parks now?' which uses the plural to talk generally. Using 'the park' is specific and changes meaning. To match the question and general preference, use plural 'parks' and keep 'now' for time reference. Suggestion: use 'parks' for general habits: 'Do you still like going to parks now?'

× Would you like see more parks in your city?

✓ Would you like to see more parks in your city?

After 'would you like' the correct structure is 'to' + base verb. The sentence is missing the infinitive marker 'to'. Also use plural 'parks' as in the examiner's question. Suggestion: include 'to' after 'would you like' — 'Would you like to see ...'.

× Are there any park you want to go there in the?

✓ Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

This sentence has multiple errors: 'park' should be plural 'parks' to match 'any' when asking generally (singular/plural issue). The phrase 'go there' is redundant when 'to' at the end conveys direction (pronoun error/word choice). The ending 'in the?' is incomplete; the examiner asked 'in the future' so add 'in the future' to complete the time reference (sentence structure error). Suggestion: use 'Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?' to be grammatical and clear.