Parks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is incomprehensible and does not respond to the examiner's question. Focus on saying a clear, direct sentence that answers whether you liked parks as a child. Use a topic sentence and one or two supporting details (a reason or a specific memory). Keep it natural and concise.

例: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I used to visit every weekend because I enjoyed playing on the swings and running around with my friends. Those visits are one of my happiest childhood memories.

提案: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Always respond directly with a clear statement about your current feelings, then add a supporting detail or reason using a linking word (for example, "because" or "so"). Keep it brief and natural.

例: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they are relaxing and a good place to exercise. For instance, I often go jogging there on weekend mornings.

提案: Again you repeated the question rather than answering. Give a direct opinion (yes/no/maybe) and then explain why with a specific reason or example. Use linking words like "because", "so", or "however" to make your response coherent.

例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because green spaces improve air quality and provide places for families to relax. For example, a new park near my neighborhood would be useful for children to play safely.

提案: Your answer is unclear and not a response. State a specific park you want to visit (real or hypothetical), then explain why you want to go and when you might visit. Use one or two supporting details and linking words to make the answer coherent.

例: Yes, I would like to visit the new botanical garden that opened last year because I enjoy seeing different plants and taking photos. I hope to go there next spring when the flowers are in bloom.

× Did you like going to box as a child?

✓ Did you like going to the park as a child?

The student used 'box' which is incorrect noun for the context and omitted an article. The examiner asked about 'parks' so the correct singular form is 'the park' when referring generally to parks one visited as a child. Use the definite article 'the' when speaking about a specific place type remembered from childhood. Suggestion: replace 'box' with 'park' and include 'the'. Grammar problem type ID:22

× Do you still like going to parks now?

✓ Do you still like going to parks now?

This sentence is already grammatically correct. It uses simple present tense to ask about a habitual preference. No changes needed. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Would you like to see more parks in your city?

✓ Would you like to see more parks in your city?

This question is grammatically correct: it uses the modal 'would' to express a polite hypothetical preference. No changes needed. Grammar problem type ID:4

× Are there any parks you want to go to a new in the TO in the future?

✓ Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

The student inserted extraneous and mistyped words ('a new', 'in the TO') and misordered the phrase. The correct structure is 'parks you want to go to in the future' using the infinitive 'to go to' and the time phrase 'in the future' at the end. Remove nonsensical words and place 'in the future' after the verb phrase. This fixes sentence structure errors and restores clarity. Grammar problem type ID:26