Parks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你在回答时完全重复了考官的问题，未给出任何信息。请直接作答并补充一至两句具体细节，例如说明喜欢与否、常去的活动或记忆。注意句子不要超过五句并使用连接词使表达连贯。

例: Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child. I used to go there with my parents every weekend to feed ducks and play on the swings, which I remember very fondly.

提案: 你只是重复了问题，没有提供回答。请直接回答考官的问题（肯定或否定），然后给出具体原因或例子，使用连接词使信息连贯，例如 because / so / however。保持回答自然且不冗长。

例: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they offer a peaceful escape from the city. For instance, I often jog there in the mornings to relax and get some fresh air.

提案: 再次仅重复问题，未表达观点或理由。请明确表态并说明原因或可能的好处，举一个相关例子以丰富内容，同时使用连接词如 because / therefore。句子不宜过多。

例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide places for families to meet. For example, a new park near my neighborhood would be great for children to play and for people to exercise.

提案: 你仍然只是重复问题，沒有提供任何具体信息。请直接回答并列举一两个想去的公园或类型（例如国家公园、主题公园），说明原因或期待的活动，使用连接词使陈述流畅。

例: Yes, I would like to visit a national park in the future because I enjoy hiking and nature photography. For example, I'd love to go to a nearby mountain park to take photos of the landscape and watch birds.

× Do you like going to parks as a child?

✓ Did you like going to parks as a child?

原句时态与时间状语不一致。问句中“as a child”表示过去的习惯或经历，应该使用过去时“Did you like...”，而不是现在时“Do you like...”。建议：遇到表示过去的时间或状态时，将动词置于过去时态（助动词用 did + 动词原形）。

× Do you still like going to parks now?

✓ Do you still like going to parks now?

该句语法正确。"still" 和 "now" 都可与一般现在时连用，表示现在仍然的习惯或喜好，无需修改。

× Would you like to see more parks in your city?

✓ Would you like to see more parks in your city?

该句语法正确。"Would you like..." 是礼貌地询问愿望或偏好，符合语境，无需修改。

× Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

✓ Are there any parks you would like to go to in the future?

原句中时态和礼貌程度可以改进。句子本意是询问对未来的愿望或打算，使用“would like to”更礼貌且与“in the future”搭配自然。原句用现在时“you want”虽不是严重错误，但在交际中用“would like”更常见、更符合礼貌表达。建议：在询问愿望或未来计划时考虑使用“would like to”或“want to”并根据语境选择更合适的礼貌程度。