Parks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a clear, grammatically correct direct answer (use past tense for childhood), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Focus on correctness of verbs, articles and prepositions, and avoid fragments.

例: Not really. When I was a child I rarely went to parks because I preferred staying at home to study and relax. For example, I often read books or hung out with my friends at home, which felt more comfortable than playing outside.

提案: Answer directly (use present simple), then explain briefly why with clear sentences and linking words (because, so, therefore). Correct verb forms and noun phrases (e.g., 'a responsibility', 'watching live shows').

例: Not really. At the moment I work long hours in a factory, so I usually prefer to stay at home and relax. For instance, after work I watch live shows or rest because I need to recover from a tiring day.

提案: Provide a balanced opinion: state your view clearly, then give specific reasons using linking words (however, but, because). Use correct noun phrases and adjectives (e.g., 'parks are useful', 'I'm not interested').

例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in the city because they provide safe places for children to play and quiet areas for people to relax. However, personally I don't use them often because I am usually busy and prefer indoor activities.

提案: Answer directly (use future tense or present preference), then give a concise reason with correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Replace informal contractions ('wanna') with 'want to' and avoid repetition.

例: To be honest, I don't plan to visit parks much in the future. I prefer going to shopping centers or coffee shops because I enjoy socialising there and they fit my lifestyle better.

× No, I don't because I'm not interests.

✓ No, I don't because I'm not interested.

The student used the noun-like form 'interests' incorrectly; the correct word is the past participle adjective 'interested' to describe personal feelings. Use 'interested' after a linking verb (be) to indicate state. Suggestion: use 'I'm interested' to express interest or 'I wasn't interested' for past contexts.

× I much prefer to stay in home and.

✓ I much prefer to stay at home.

The phrase used wrong preposition and had an incomplete clause. Use 'prefer to stay at home' in present simple to express habitual preference. Remove the stray 'and.' Suggestion: 'I much prefer to stay at home.'

× Hit the book and chill in My friend in Home Plus.

✓ I would hit the books and chill with my friend at Home Plus.

Sentence fragments and incorrect capitalization were used. 'Hit the book' is informal and should be pluralized to 'hit the books' meaning study; 'chill with my friend' needs preposition 'with' and location 'at Home Plus'. Use 'I would' or 'I used to' to complete the sentence. Suggestion: include a subject and appropriate prepositions.

× We are.

✓ We are.

This fragment 'We are.' is incomplete and unclear. It lacks a complement; keep it only if followed by information (for example, 'We are friends'). Suggestion: add the missing information or remove the fragment.

× Not really. Nowadays I'm very busy because I'm working in a factory and I have a responsibilities and.

✓ Not really. Nowadays I'm very busy because I work in a factory and I have responsibilities.

Mixing of present continuous and present simple is inconsistent. For routines or jobs, use simple present 'I work'. 'A responsibilities' uses incorrect article and plural form; use 'responsibilities' without 'a'. Remove the trailing 'and.' Suggestion: use 'I work in a factory and I have responsibilities.'

× I'm much interested, not interested.

✓ I'm not interested.

'Much interested' is unnatural; use 'very interested' or 'not interested'. The student contradicts themselves; choose the intended meaning. Suggestion: simplify to 'I'm not interested.'

× I preferred in stay home and watching live.

✓ I prefer to stay at home and watch live TV.

Wrong tense 'preferred' (past) conflicts with general preference; use present 'prefer'. 'prefer to stay' uses 'to' plus base verb; 'watching live' should be 'watch live TV'. Also use preposition 'at home'. Suggestion: 'I prefer to stay at home and watch live TV.'

× Yes, I would like to because parks very useful for children and relaxing, but my sights I don't, I don't need the parks because I'm not interest interested nowadays.

✓ Yes, I would like to because parks are very useful for children and for relaxing, but I don't think we need more parks because I'm not interested nowadays.

Multiple errors: missing verb 'are' (there be issue/verb), so 'parks very useful' must be 'parks are very useful' (Grammar problem 3 or 6), incorrect phrase 'my sights' unclear; replace with 'I don't think we need'. Duplicate 'interest interested' fixed to 'interested'. Added 'for' before 'relaxing'. Suggestion: use complete clauses: 'parks are very useful... but I don't think we need more parks.'

× To be honest, I don't wanna go to parks in the future.

✓ To be honest, I don't want to go to parks in the future.

Use of informal 'wanna' is inappropriate in formal speaking; replace with 'want to'. Modal/auxiliary 'do' plus 'want to' is correct. Suggestion: use 'don't want to' in formal contexts.

× I prefer like a shopping center or coffee shop because.

✓ I would prefer a shopping center or a coffee shop because...

Mixing 'prefer like' is incorrect; use 'prefer' or 'would prefer'. Include articles 'a' before singular nouns. The sentence is incomplete; add a reason. Suggestion: 'I would prefer a shopping center or a coffee shop because I enjoy them.'

× I really enjoy much enjoy and the coffee shop.

✓ I really enjoy going to coffee shops.

Phrase 'really enjoy much enjoy' is redundant and ungrammatical. 'Enjoy' is followed by a gerund 'going to'. 'the coffee shop' is too specific; use plural or 'coffee shops'. Suggestion: 'I really enjoy going to coffee shops.'