Parks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Jawaban terlalu singkat dan tidak jelas. Berikan topik kalimat yang langsung menjawab pertanyaan, lalu tambahkan 1–2 kalimat pendukung (mis. alasan atau kenangan singkat). Gunakan kosakata sederhana tetapi tepat, dan hindari jawaban satu kata.

例: Not really. I rarely went to parks as a child because my family lived in a small apartment and we usually spent weekends visiting relatives. I remember preferring indoor activities like reading or watching TV.

提案: Kalimat mengandung kesalahan tata bahasa dan kurang jelas. Berikan jawaban topik yang jelas, jelaskan alasan dengan struktur kalimat yang benar, dan gunakan linking word seperti 'because' atau 'although'. Perbaiki bentuk kata kerja (contoh: 'want to learn').

例: Not really, because I often prefer studying or working when I have free time. Although I appreciate green spaces, I usually spend my spare time preparing for exams or attending classes.

提案: Jawaban mengandung pengulangan dan ucapan pengisi ('uh'), serta struktur yang canggung. Jawab langsung lalu beri alasan yang lebih spesifik, gunakan frasa yang tepat (mis. 'I really enjoy looking at parks' → 'I really enjoy spending time in parks' atau 'I enjoy the scenery').

例: Yes, I would. I really enjoy spending time in parks because they offer pleasant scenery and a peaceful place to relax. More parks would give residents better opportunities for exercise and family outings.

提案: Jawaban terlalu singkat dan tidak menjelaskan alasan. Jika tidak ada tempat khusus, jelaskan mengapa (mis. preferensi lain, keterbatasan waktu) atau sebutkan jenis taman yang ingin dikunjungi di masa depan. Gunakan 2–3 kalimat agar lebih informatif.

例: Not at the moment. I don't have a specific park in mind because I usually choose places based on convenience. However, in the future I would like to visit a large botanical garden to see different plant species.

× No, because I'm want to learning.

✓ No, because I want to study.

The original sentence uses an incorrect verb form and auxiliary: 'I'm want to learning' mixes present continuous 'I am' with the base verb want and the gerund learning. Use simple present 'I want' for current wants and the base verb 'study' (not 'learning') after it. Suggestion: use 'I want to' + base verb (I want to study).

× Yes, because I am really like, uh, look at parks.

✓ Yes, because I really like looking at parks.

The original mixes 'am' with 'like' and an infinitive structure incorrectly: 'I am really like' is ungrammatical. Use 'I really like' (verb like) followed by the gerund 'looking' when describing enjoyment of an activity. Also remove filler 'uh' in formal replies. Suggestion: 'I really like looking at parks.'