Parks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is very short and contains a grammatical mistake. Start with a full sentence (e.g., "Yes, I liked going to parks as a child") and add one or two specific supporting details to make it more natural and informative. Use linking words if you add more than one idea.

例: Yes, I liked going to parks as a child. For example, I used to play on the swings and have picnics with my family, which made those visits very memorable.

提案: Your answer is unclear and ungrammatical. Give a clear direct response (Yes/No) in one sentence, then add a reason with correct grammar. Avoid fillers and correct verb forms. Use a linking word like "because" to connect ideas.

例: No, I don't go to parks much now because I usually relax at home; I often read or play games in my room instead.

提案: This response is unintelligible and contains many fillers. If you don't understand a question, ask the examiner to repeat it. Otherwise give a clear yes/no and a reason. Keep answers short and relevant, using linking words for clarity.

例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because green spaces improve air quality and provide places for exercise and relaxation.

提案: Your answer is confused and grammatically incorrect. Use the future tense if asked about the future, and state a specific park or type of park if possible. Keep it concise and use linking words like "because" to give a reason.

例: Yes, I would like to visit the new riverside park next summer because I enjoy walking there and the view looks beautiful.

× Yes, I like.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question 'Did you like going to parks as a child?' is in the past tense, so the response must also be in past tense. Using 'I like' (present) is inconsistent. Change to 'I did' or 'Yes, I liked them' to match past tense. Suggestion: Use past tense verbs to answer past-tense questions, e.g., 'Yes, I liked going to parks.'

× Uh no. Uh no. I just play is in my bed.

✓ No. I just play in my bed.

The examiner asked 'Do you still like going to parks now?' which expects a present tense reply. The original sentence contains ungrammatical wording 'play is' and extra hesitations. Removing 'is' and using present simple 'play' fits the habitual action. If intending to say a current habit, use 'I just play in my bed' or 'I just stay in my bed and play.' Suggestion: Keep present simple for current habits and remove unnecessary words.

× Would you like to see more parks in your city?

✓ Would you like to see more parks in your city?

No correction needed. This sentence is grammatically correct. Respond using modal 'would' to express preference.

× Uh, you know, uh uttama uttama, uh uttama kadam.

✓ (No clear English content to correct.)

The student's reply contains non-English or unclear vocalizations ('uttama uttama, uttama kadam') and does not form a grammatical English sentence. There is no identifiable grammatical category from the provided list to correct. Suggestion: Provide an English reply that expresses preference, e.g., 'Yes, I would like more parks in my city.' or 'No, I don't need more parks.' Note: Only correct sentences that match the grammar problem list; this is untranslatable filler.

× Yeah, uh. Yes, I go to the pressure in the park because I enjoy The Walking, walking in the park.

✓ Yes. I go to the park because I enjoy walking in the park.

The original has several problems: 'go to the pressure' is incorrect vocabulary/word choice; 'The Walking' capitalized and repeated 'walking' is awkward. The question was future-oriented 'Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?' but the student speaks about a habitual action. A better future-oriented reply would be 'Yes, I would like to go to the park because I enjoy walking in the park.' or if describing habit, use present simple. Here corrected to present simple 'I go to the park because I enjoy walking in the park.' Suggestion: Use correct nouns ('park'), avoid unnecessary capitalization and repetition, and match tense to the question (use 'would like to go' for future intent).