Parks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Pronunciation and clarity: the student mispronounced or misread key words ("pot" instead of "park") and turned the question into a question back to the examiner rather than answering. Focus on listening carefully to the question, answering directly, and practicing clear pronunciation of key words like "park". Also, give a brief direct response followed by one supporting detail (max 3–5 short sentences).

例: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often played on the swings and climbed trees with my friends because we enjoyed outdoor games. This gave me more freedom and fresh air, which I still appreciate.

提案: Grammar and sentence completeness: the student responded with an incomplete sentence and omitted subject and verb forms. Practice producing full sentences: start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., "Yes, I still enjoy going to parks."), then add one reason using a linking word (e.g., "because" or "so"). Keep it concise and natural.

例: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I go regularly because I find walking in green spaces relaxing and good for my health.

提案: Answer the examiner's question rather than repeating it; the student repeated the question back. Focus on understanding question forms like "Would you like..." and respond with a polite opinion, giving a specific reason. Use a linking word (e.g., "because") to add one supporting detail and keep the reply to 1–3 short sentences.

例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because many neighborhoods lack green spaces. New parks would give people places to exercise and relax.

提案: Comprehension and response: the student repeated the question incorrectly instead of answering. Also there are grammatical errors (singular/plural and extra words). Practice understanding "Are there any..." questions and respond with a clear statement of intention, followed by a specific example of a park and a reason. Use one linking word (e.g., "because" or "for") to add detail.

例: Yes, I would like to visit the central botanical garden next year because I have heard it has rare plants and beautiful walking paths.

× Did you like going to pot as a child?

✓ Did you like going to parks as a child?

The student used 'pot' instead of 'parks', which is a wrong word (likely a typo). Also 'parks' should be plural to match the general idea of visiting parks in childhood. Suggestion: use the noun 'park' or 'parks' depending on whether you mean one or multiple; here plural matches the examiner's question.

× These days like going to park now.

✓ These days I like going to parks.

The original sentence lacks a subject and has redundant time expressions ('These days' and 'now'). Also 'park' should be plural when speaking generally. Suggestion: include the subject 'I', keep one time expression ('These days'), and use plural 'parks' for general habit.

× Would you like to see more park in your city?

✓ I would like to see more parks in my city.

The student repeated the examiner's question form and used 'park' singular and wrong subject. The response should be first person 'I' and plural 'parks' to mean additional green spaces. Suggestion: change subject to 'I' and use 'parks' for general countable nouns.

× Are there any park you want to go do in the future?

✓ Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

The student used 'park' singular instead of plural 'parks' after 'any', and misordered verb particles ('go do' is incorrect). The correct structure is 'go to' for visiting places. Suggestion: use 'parks' with 'any' and the correct verb phrase 'go to'.