Parks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap net ama dilbilgisi ve açıklama eksikliği var. Türkçe olarak: Cevabınızı daha doğru gramer ile ve daha ayrıntılı yapın. Örneğin geçmiş zamanda 'liked' kullanın, neden hoşlandığınızı açıklayın ve iki ya da üç kısa cümleyle destekleyin. Bağlaçlar (because, and, so) kullanarak akıcılığı artırın.

例: Yes, I liked going to parks as a child because they were a fun place to meet my friends. We often played games like tag and climbed trees, which made every visit exciting.

提案: Cevap anlam olarak belirsiz ve dilbilgisi hatalı. Türkçe olarak: Neden sevmediğinizi açıkça belirtin ve doğru gramer kullanın (örneğin 'I don't like them because there are...'). Öznel bir neden verin ve bir örnekle destekleyin. Bağlaçlarla cümleleri bağlayın.

例: No, I don't enjoy going to parks now because they are often crowded with children. For example, last weekend I couldn't find a quiet spot to sit or read.

提案: Cevap mantıklı ama tamamlanmamış ve ifadeler yanlış seçilmiş. Türkçe olarak: 'because' dan sonra sebebi tamamlayın; 'crossed with children' yerine 'filled with children' ya da 'used by families' gibi uygun ifadeler kullanın. Neden daha fazla parka ihtiyaç olduğunu spesifik örneklerle açıklayın.

例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide safe spaces for families and children to play. For instance, new parks could include playgrounds and benches, which would improve community life.

提案: Cevap doğal değil ve kelime sırası hatalı. Türkçe olarak: Doğru kelime sırasını kullanın (örneğin 'I don't want to go to any parks in the future') ve sebep ekleyin. Alternatif olarak olumlu bir tercih belirtin ve kısa bir açıklama verin.

例: No, I don't want to go to any parks in the future because I prefer visiting museums or cafes. However, I might go to a park if there is a special event or festival.

× Yes, I like going to parks as a child with my friends.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks as a child with my friends.

The question asks about past habit 'Did you like...' so the verb should be past tense. Use 'liked' to match question tense. Suggestion: Use past simple for past habits (I liked going to parks).

× We have funny.

✓ We had fun.

'Have funny' is incorrect; 'fun' is a noun meaning enjoyment. In past context use past 'had fun'. Also 'funny' is an adjective meaning 'amusing'. Use 'We had fun' to express enjoyment.

× No, I don't like because.

✓ No, I don't like it now because...

The examiner asked about present preference 'Do you still like...?' so use present tense 'don't like'. Also the sentence is incomplete: 'because' needs an object or clause. Add 'it' and a reason after 'because'. Suggestion: Provide a reason after 'because', e.g., 'No, I don't like it now because there are too many people.'

× There is four children.

✓ There are four children.

When expressing existence with 'there is/are', use 'there are' for plural nouns. 'Children' is plural so use 'are'. Suggestion: Match 'is/are' to the noun number.

× Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because...

The sentence ends abruptly after 'because'. Structurally it's fine with 'would like' for polite desire, but 'because' requires a reason. Add a reason after 'because', e.g., 'because they provide places for children to play.'

× They are usually crossed with children.

✓ They are usually crowded with children.

'Crossed with' is incorrect collocation for many people present. Use 'crowded with' to indicate many children in the parks. 'Crossed' does not convey this meaning. Suggestion: Use appropriate collocations: 'crowded with' or 'filled with'.

× No, I don't want to go to in the future any parks.

✓ No, I don't want to go to any parks in the future.

Word order is incorrect. Place 'any parks' after 'to' and 'in the future' at end or after verb: 'I don't want to go to any parks in the future.' Also keep present tense for future plans with 'in the future' or use 'will' if necessary.