Parks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response repeats the examiner's question instead of answering. In Part 1 you should respond directly with a clear topic sentence and then one or two supporting details. Keep answers natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences). Use linking words if you add details (for example: "because", "and", "so").

例: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because there was a big playground where I could climb and play with friends. Also, my parents often had picnics there, so it felt like a special family outing.

提案: You again repeated the question and made grammatical errors ("to going" and singular/plural mismatches). Instead, answer with a direct sentence, correct grammar, and one or two supporting details using linking words (for example: "Although", "because").

例: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, because they are peaceful and good for exercise. For example, I often walk there in the mornings and sometimes meet friends for a coffee.

提案: The reply simply echoes the question. To improve, state your opinion clearly (Yes/No), give a reason, and add a specific detail or example. Use linking words like "because" or "for example" to make your answer coherent.

例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because green spaces improve air quality and provide places for families to relax. For instance, a small park near my apartment would be useful for children to play safely.

提案: Your reply repeats the question and contains pronunciation/spelling errors ("parts" instead of "parks"). Answer directly with a clear statement about any park(s) you want to visit, include a reason and a specific detail, and keep it brief and natural.

例: Yes, I would like to visit the national botanical gardens next year because I enjoy seeing rare plants and taking photographs. I plan to go in spring when the flowers are in full bloom.

× Do you still like to going to park now?

✓ Do you still like going to parks now?

The verb 'like' should be followed by the base verb or gerund; using 'to going' mixes infinitive marker 'to' with gerund 'going', which is incorrect. Also 'park' should be plural 'parks' to match the general question and sound natural, and 'now' is fine but can follow 'parks'. Suggestion: use 'like going' or 'like to go' and use 'parks' for general reference.

× Are there are any parts you want to go to in the future?

✓ Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

This sentence has multiple problems: duplicate 'are' (redundant auxiliary) and 'parts' is a misspelling of 'parks'. According to the 'There be' pattern, start with 'Are there any...' and follow with the noun. Suggestion: remove the extra 'are' and correct the noun to 'parks'. Keep the rest of the structure to indicate future intent.