Parks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct answer (yes/no or a short statement), then add one brief supporting detail. Keep it natural and avoid repeating the question. Use one or two linking words if adding details.

例: Yes, I liked going to parks as a child. For example, I often played on the swings and climbed trees with my friends, which made weekends very fun.

提案: Again you repeated the question rather than answering. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you still like parks, then provide a reason or short description of what you do there. Use a linking word like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they are peaceful and good for exercise; for instance, I often go jogging there on Sunday mornings.

提案: Your response is unclear and ungrammatical. Answer the question directly (yes/no or a clear opinion), then explain why and give a specific suggestion. Use linking words such as "because" or "for example." Keep sentences concise and natural.

例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because many neighborhoods lack green spaces; for example, adding small community parks with benches and playgrounds would benefit families and elderly residents.

提案: You again repeated and distorted the question rather than answering. Answer directly about a specific park you want to visit or say you have no particular plans. Then add a reason or detail and use linking words like "because" or "for instance." Keep it within a few concise sentences.

例: Yes, I would like to visit the new botanical garden next year because I love plants and it recently opened a rare-plant exhibit; for instance, I plan to go there with my family during spring.

× Did you like going to parks as a child?

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks as a child.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure and pragmatic error: the response should be a declarative past-tense sentence matching the question about past preference. Use past simple 'liked' for a past habit and provide a subject and verb to form a complete answer. Suggestion: Begin with 'Yes' or 'No' and use past simple (I liked) and add a brief reason or example.

× Did you still like going to parks now?

✓ Do you still like going to parks now?

The examiner's question uses present simple to ask about current preference. The student used past auxiliary 'Did' which mismatches the time reference. Use present simple 'Do' with base verb 'like' for current habits. Suggestion: For present habits use 'Do you ...?' and verb in base form.

× What do you like to see more park in your city?

✓ Would you like to see more parks in your city?

The student produced an ungrammatical question that mixes 'what' and 'do you like to see' and uses singular 'park'. The examiner asked 'Would you like to see more parks in your city?' which is a polite conditional request. Correct form uses modal 'Would' + subject + base verb and plural 'parks' for general quantity. Suggestion: Use 'Would you like to see more parks in your city?' or 'Do you want to see more parks in your city?'. Use plural when speaking generally.

× Are there any parks you went go to in the future?

✓ Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

The student mixed past tense 'went' with infinitive 'go', creating an impossible sequence. The examiner asks about future intentions, so use present-tense verb of desire 'want' + infinitive 'to go' or modal 'will'/'would like'. Suggestion: Use 'want to go', 'would like to go', or 'will go' for future plans (e.g., 'Are there any parks you would like to go to in the future?').