Parks— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Did you like going to parks as a child?
受験者
Yes, I think.
試験官
Do you still like going to parks now?
受験者
Yes, I do.
試験官
Would you like to see more parks in your city?
受験者
Of course.
試験官
Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?
受験者
I most went to Lamb Long Park in Buckingham City.
評価
総合
Part 1
Did you like going to parks as a child?
スコア: 35.0提案: Câu trả lời quá ngắn, không trực tiếp và thiếu chi tiết. Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng (ví dụ: 'Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child.') rồi cung cấp 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể (nhớ dùng từ nối nếu cần). Tránh dùng từ mơ hồ như 'I think'.
例: Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child. I used to go there every weekend to play on the swings and ride my bicycle, which was my favorite activity.
Do you still like going to parks now?
スコア: 40.0提案: Câu trả lời ngắn và thiếu thông tin bổ sung. Nên trả lời trực tiếp rồi nêu lý do hoặc tần suất, kèm từ nối để làm rõ suy nghĩ (ví dụ: 'Yes, I do because...' hoặc 'Yes, I still enjoy them as...').
例: Yes, I do because parks are a peaceful place to exercise and relax. For example, I often jog there twice a week and sit by the lake to read.
Would you like to see more parks in your city?
スコア: 30.0提案: Câu trả lời quá ngắn, không giải thích vì sao. Nên mở rộng bằng cách nêu lý do cụ thể và lợi ích nếu có thêm công viên, dùng từ nối để liên kết ý (e.g., 'because', 'so that').
例: Of course, I would like more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide safe places for children to play, so families can spend time outdoors without traveling far.
Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?
スコア: 25.0提案: Câu trả lời không trả lời câu hỏi về tương lai và ngữ pháp sai. Cần trả lời trực tiếp về 'công viên nào muốn đến trong tương lai', dùng thì tương lai hoặc cấu trúc ý muốn, đồng thời cung cấp lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: 'I would like to visit... because...').
例: Yes, I would like to visit Lamb Long Park in Buckingham City because I’ve heard it has beautiful gardens and a large lake, and I want to take photographs and relax there.
文法
× I most went to Lamb Long Park in Buckingham City.
✓ I mostly went to Lamb Long Park in Buckingham City.
The student intended to say they went there most often in the past. They used 'most' incorrectly before the verb 'went'. The correct adverb is 'mostly' to describe frequency or tendency. Use 'mostly' before the verb to indicate that the majority of their visits were to that park. If the meaning is 'the park I went to the most', a more natural correction is: 'The park I went to most was Lamb Long Park in Buckingham City.'
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