Views— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
受験者
I do like taking pictures of a lot of different views. Uh, I tend to look at the photos I've been H I've had and to recall the memories I had and yeah.
試験官
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
受験者
Uh, I'll say rural areas because I do love the nature and the green or even the sea, and I love the color palette of the natures, but also a love of an area's view because I'm from the city and it makes me feel home.
試験官
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
受験者
I like views in European countries because I can't see the views are not, uh, what I used to look. So I love it and they're really cool and historically and naturally.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
スコア: 60.0提案: Be more concise and clear. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid filler (uh, yeah), and give one specific reason with a brief example. Keep it under five sentences and use linking words if adding detail.
例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I often review my photos to remember the moments and feelings associated with each place, especially when I travel, which helps me relive those experiences.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
スコア: 65.0提案: Structure your answer: give a clear preference first, then one or two specific reasons using linking words (because, however). Correct grammar (e.g., 'I love nature' not 'the natures') and avoid repeating words.
例: I prefer rural views because I love natural scenery such as green fields and the sea. However, I also appreciate urban views since I grew up in a city and they make me feel at home.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
スコア: 55.0提案: Be clearer and more grammatical. State your preference directly, explain why with specific details (e.g., architectural styles or landscapes), and avoid unclear negatives. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example.'
例: I prefer views in other countries, especially in Europe, because the architecture and landscapes are different from what I'm used to. For example, historic city centers and coastal cliffs in Europe offer scenes I rarely see at home.
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