Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap çok kısa ve doğal akıştan uzak. İngilizce cümle yapıları ve noktalama hataları var; ayrıca nedenini ve bir örnek ekleyerek genişletmelisiniz. Bağlaç (because, so, for example) kullanarak mantıksal bir akış oluşturun ve maksimum 5 cümleyi aşmayın.

例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially natural landscapes. I find nature calming and I like capturing sunsets and forests because the light and colors change so much. For example, last weekend I photographed a river at sunset and the reflections were stunning.

提案: Cevap doğrudan ama çok kısa; destekleyici detay veya neden belirtilmemiş. Bir konu cümlesi kurun, ardından nedenleri ve bir örnek verin. Bağlaçlar (because, so, however) kullanarak mantığı güçlendirin ve spesifik ayrıntılar ekleyin.

例: I prefer views in rural areas because they are quieter and more picturesque. The open fields and traditional villages offer more natural beauty than busy city streets. For example, I often visit nearby countryside to photograph old farms and wide horizons.

提案: Cevap anlaşılmaz ve mantıksal bir neden içermiyor. "because my country is 7" ifadesi anlamsız; bunun yerine açık, spesifik bir neden verin (örneğin kültür, doğa, anılar). Ayrıca tam cümle kullanın ve ek bir örnekle destekleyin.

例: I prefer views in my own country because I feel more connected to its landscapes and culture. The familiar places bring back memories and I know the best spots to photograph. For example, I love photographing the coastal cliffs near my hometown where I grew up.

× Yes, of course, Especially nature. Real.

✓ Yes, of course. Especially nature. Really.

The original contains sentence fragments and informal short responses. 'Especially' should start a new sentence and 'Real.' is not correct; use 'Really.' to mean 'truly'. Capitalization and punctuation needed: replace the commas with a period after 'of course' and capitalize 'Especially' or keep lowercase after period. Suggestion: 'Yes, of course. I especially like nature.' for a fuller response.

× I prefer my country because my country is 7.

✓ I prefer my country because it is better for me.

The original sentence is unclear and contains a fragment 'my country is 7' which seems nonsensical. This is a sentence structure and meaning issue. Replace the unclear phrase with a reason that answers the question. If the speaker meant a rating, use 'I prefer my country because I rated it 7 out of 10.' or give a clear reason such as 'because it is more familiar'.