Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 句子有表达意图，但存在语法和词汇使用问题（如“considering that”用法不自然，“variety views”应为“various views”，“preserved”时态不对）。回答较长且略显冗余，建议用一到两句更自然直接的表达，注意动词时态和名词搭配，使用连接词时保持简洁。

例: Yes, I do. Taking photos of different views helps me capture beautiful scenery and remember the atmosphere of a moment.

提案: 意思清楚，但有词汇和搭配错误（“in case of”用法不当，应用“because of”或“for”来解释原因；“lively creature”应为“lively wildlife”或“wildlife”/“animals”）。句子可以更紧凑，避免短句断裂，使用连接词使逻辑更自然。

例: I prefer rural views because of the peaceful atmosphere and the lively wildlife, which help me feel calm.

提案: 回答没有正面回应“本国还是其他国家”的对比问题，偏题。还有语法错误（“in case of”应改为“because of”，“lively creatures which helps”主谓不一致，“watching bird is my favorite activities”单复数和词形错误）。建议直接回答问题并给出简短理由与具体例子，注意主谓一致和名词单复数。

例: I prefer rural views in my own country because they are peaceful and familiar. For example, I often go to the countryside to watch birds, which is one of my favorite activities.

× Yes, I do, considering that taking photos of variety views can not only capture fascinating sceneries but also preserved the memorable atmosphere of that moment.

✓ Yes, I do, considering that taking photos of various views can not only capture fascinating scenery but also preserve the memorable atmosphere of the moment.

错误类型（过去分词/动词形式）：句中使用了“preserved”，但句子其余部分是一般现在时（can ...），所以动词应使用不定式或原形“preserve”。另外，存在其他问题：用词和名词形式不正确。建议：将“variety views”改为“various views”（表示各种景色），将“sceneries”改为不可数名词“scenery”，并把“preserved”改为原形“preserve”。这样时态和搭配一致。

× I'm fond of the views in rural areas in case of the peaceful atmosphere as well as the lively creature.

✓ I'm fond of the views in rural areas because of the peaceful atmosphere as well as the lively wildlife.

错误类型（介词/短语使用不当）：原句使用“in case of”不合适，因其表示“以防”的意思，而此处应表达“因为/由于”。另外，“lively creature”单数且搭配不自然，应该用复数或更合适的词如“wildlife”。建议：把“in case of”改为“because of”或“due to”，并用“lively wildlife”或“lively creatures”。

× They make me feel calm.

✓ They make me feel calm.

错误类型（主谓一致）：该句其实语法正确，主语“they”与动词“make”一致，无需修改。特此说明以符合检查要求。

× I'm fond of the views in rural areas in case of the peaceful atmosphere and lively creatures which helps me feel calm and relaxed.

✓ I'm fond of the views in rural areas because of the peaceful atmosphere and lively creatures, which help me feel calm and relaxed.

错误类型（介词/从句和主谓一致）：同样不应使用“in case of”，应改为“because of”。其次，“which helps”中的关系代词指代复数“atmosphere and lively creatures”，因此动词应为复数“help”。建议：改为“because of... , which help...”以保持逻辑和主谓一致。

× For example, watching bird is my favorite activities in countryside.

✓ For example, watching birds is my favorite activity in the countryside.

错误类型（动词/单复数使用不当）：原句中存在名词单复数和主谓一致错误。应把“bird”改为复数“birds”，并把“activities”改为单数“activity”，因为主语“watching birds”作为一个活动是单一的概念。另一个小问题是缺少定冠词，改为“the countryside”。建议：注意动名词短语作为单一活动时后面的表语通常用单数；地区名词前常用定冠词“the countryside”。