Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Сократите повторы, улучшите грамматику и структуру ответа: начните с прямого утверждения, затем добавьте одно-два связанных предложения с конкретными деталями. Избегайте лишних пауз и повторов (например, "take taking"). Также используйте связки (because, so, when) для связности и правильные формы глаголов.

例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I recently bought a new phone because it has an excellent camera, so I often take pictures when I go for walks or travel to new places.

提案: Сфокусируйте ответ, исправьте грамматические ошибки и добавьте конкретные описания: начните с чёткого выбора, затем объясните почему, приведите пример и используйте связующие слова. Избегайте бессмысленных повторов ("Sky sky").

例: I prefer rural views because I enjoy natural landscapes. For example, when I visited a village recently, I loved the rolling hills and quiet fields, which felt relaxing compared with busy city streets.

提案: Устраните разговорные сокращения и неуверённые вставки ("wanna", "umm"), исправьте согласование (views ... are) и завершите мысль. Начните с прямого ответа, затем объясните причину и приведите пример, используя связки (however, although, because).

例: I prefer seeing views in other countries because I enjoy discovering different landscapes and cultures. Although my country has beautiful places, I like to travel abroad to explore new scenery and take photos of unique natural settings.

× Yes I do, I bought a new phone recently because of the camera 'cause I really like take taking the pictures and I do it often when I go walk or just traveling somewhere.

✓ Yes, I do. I bought a new phone recently because of the camera, 'cause I really like taking pictures and I do it often when I go for a walk or when I travel somewhere.

Student uses incorrect verb forms and omits necessary prepositions. Use 'taking' after 'like' (verb + -ing). Remove the extra 'the' before 'pictures' when speaking generally. Use the phrase 'go for a walk' (fixed preposition and noun form) and parallel structure 'when I go for a walk or when I travel somewhere'. Suggestions: after verbs like 'like', 'enjoy', 'prefer' use the -ing form; avoid inserting extra articles before plural, countable nouns when speaking generally; use set expressions like 'go for a walk'.

× Honestly, I think I prefer views in rural areas 'cause I used to visiting a village and the views there is amazing and fancy. I like the nature. I don't really enjoy the views. Sky sky.

✓ Honestly, I think I prefer views in rural areas because I used to visit a village and the views there were amazing and beautiful. I like nature. I don't really enjoy views of the sky.

Multiple tense and agreement errors: 'used to visiting' is incorrect; use 'used to visit' (past habitual). 'The views there is' has subject-verb agreement; plural 'views' requires 'were' (past) or 'are' depending on meaning. 'Fancy' is odd for natural scenery; 'beautiful' is more appropriate. 'I like the nature' should be 'I like nature' (no article). 'I don't really enjoy the views. Sky sky.' is ungrammatical and unclear; assume meaning 'views of the sky' and combine into one sentence. Suggestions: use 'used to' + base verb; ensure verb agrees with plural subjects; omit 'the' with general noun 'nature'; choose vocabulary that fits context and make sentences concise.

× I don't wanna say that the views in my country is ugly or not beautiful, but honestly I prefer to umm travel to another country and just explore that nature abroad and I wouldn't take a lot of pictures of.

✓ I don't want to say that the views in my country are ugly or not beautiful, but honestly I prefer to travel to another country and just explore nature abroad, and I wouldn't take a lot of pictures there.

Problems: informal 'wanna' should be 'want to' in formal spoken English; 'the views in my country is' has subject-verb agreement error — use 'are' for plural. 'Explore that nature abroad' is incorrect preposition and article use; use 'explore nature abroad' without 'that'. Ending 'I wouldn't take a lot of pictures of' is a dangling preposition; complete with 'there' or rephrase. Suggestions: use correct prepositions and articles, fix subject-verb agreement, avoid dangling prepositions by adding the object or adverb ('there'), and prefer standard expressions in test contexts.