Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 用更自然、简洁的句子直接回答问题，并注意语法和单复数。可以先给出主句表明喜欢拍照，然后补充具体例子和原因，句子控制在三到四句内，使用连接词如 because, so, such as 提高连贯性。还应注意动词形式（prefer to do, play 不用在旅游语境），以及名词复数（beaches）。

例: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy taking photos when I travel during summer or winter because the scenery is often very clear and colorful. For example, when I visited Sanya I took many pictures of the beaches and sunsets because the light there was beautiful. I usually take more photos in coastal cities than in other places.

提案: 回答要直接并语法正确，先说明偏好（urban or rural），然后给出具体原因并用连接词（because, however）。避免词汇错误（playing → visiting, real areas unclear），逻辑要清晰（城市与乡村的比较），并使用正确的复数和冠词。保持两到三句即可。

例: I prefer rural areas because they tend to have more natural scenery, such as beaches and quiet countryside. For instance, I choose coastal villages for vacations since they are less crowded and offer nice photo opportunities. However, I sometimes visit cities for cultural sights.

提案: 先明确回答（both / my country / other countries），然后说明原因并给出具体例子。注意语法（every country has its own beautiful views），避免重复和冗长，使用连接词如 because, for example，使表达更地道。控制在三句内。

例: I don’t mind where the views are; I enjoy beautiful scenery both in my country and abroad because each place offers something unique. For example, China has stunning countryside and beaches, while other countries might have dramatic mountains or historic towns that I also love to photograph.

× Of course, I prefer have a trip in summer vacation or winter vacation and I prefer play in a beautiful city such as Sanya city.

✓ Of course, I prefer having a trip in summer vacation or winter vacation, and I prefer playing in a beautiful city such as Sanya.

此句中動詞 prefer 後需接動名詞（-ing）或不定式，但更常用的是動名詞。原句使用 base form（have, play）不符合 prefer 的習慣用法。建議把 have 改為 having，play 改為 playing，並加上逗號連接兩個並列分句以改善句子流暢性。

× There are a lot of beautiful beach in there.

✓ There are a lot of beautiful beaches there.

原句中 beach 應使用複數 beaches 表示許多海灘；且 there 不需要前置詞 in，正確用法為 ...beaches there 或 ...there are many beaches. 同時去掉不必要的定冠詞或介詞可使句子更自然。

× I usually take more photos in this city.

✓ I usually take more photos in this city.

原句語法正確，但要注意比較時用 more photos 需有比較參照（例如 than elsewhere）。此處句子可保留，如果想表達“拍更多照片（比其他地方）”，建議補充比較對象。

× For me I prefer playing a real areas because there are lots of beautiful beaches.

✓ For me, I prefer playing in real areas because there are lots of beautiful beaches.

原句中 area 為可數名詞，且前面使用 a real areas（單數 a 與複數 areas 不一致）。若指多個地區應用 real areas；若指單一則為 a real area。此外，play 後面需加介詞 in 表示在某地活動。建議改為 playing in real areas 或 I prefer real areas（改動依語意）。

× Location in countryside, city or urban don't have more beautiful beaches.

✓ Locations in the countryside, the city, or urban areas don't have many beautiful beaches.

原句主語與動詞不一致且詞彙選用不當。Location 應用複數 locations 或直接用 places；countryside 前加定冠詞 the；urban 作形容詞須搭配 areas 或用 urban areas。don't 與複數主語匹配，但原句中 more beautiful beaches 用法含糊，應改為 many beautiful beaches 表示數量較多。整句需調整語序與冠詞。

× So if I have a vacation I will play in a countryside.

✓ So if I have a vacation, I will stay/play in the countryside.

a countryside 用法不正確，countryside 為不可數名詞，前面通常不加不定冠詞 a，正確為 the countryside 或 simply countryside。根據語意選擇 stay 或 play 表達停留或玩耍更自然。並在 if 子句後加逗號以改善可讀性。

× I like all countries beautiful views because I think every country has themselves beautiful views such as there are lots of beautiful countryside and beaches in China and other countries has themselves good views too.

✓ I like beautiful views in all countries because I think every country has its own beautiful views. For example, there are lots of beautiful countrysides and beaches in China, and other countries have good views too.

原句中代詞使用錯誤：every country 應搭配 its（單數所有格），而不是 themselves（複數）。此外，語句過長且結構混亂，需拆分為兩句。China and other countries has → have（主謂一致）; countryside 複數為 countrysides 或用 the countryside。建議使用 its own 表達“各自的”。