Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more natural and slightly expand your answer with a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Correct small grammar errors (take picture → take pictures) and avoid redundancy. Use linking words if you add details.

例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph city skylines and mountain landscapes because I like capturing contrasts in light and colour.

提案: Give a fuller answer with a reason and an example. Avoid filler words like “Uh.” Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one linked supporting detail using a linking phrase (for example, because, so).

例: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the architecture and busy streets; for example, I like photographing modern skyscrapers and lively markets that show local life.

提案: Make the response grammatical and specific. State the preference clearly, give a concise reason with a concrete detail, and use linking words to connect ideas. Avoid repeating phrases and correct grammar errors (e.g., “my country is nice” is vague; “my country has many ethnic groups” is correct).

例: I prefer views in my own country because it has diverse landscapes and many ethnic communities; for instance, I enjoy photographing traditional festivals and rural villages that reflect different cultures.

× Yes, I like to take picture of different views.

✓ Yes, I like to take pictures of different views.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' because it refers to multiple instances (different views). Use plural form for countable nouns when speaking generally about more than one item. Suggestion: Remember that 'take pictures' is the common collocation for photographing multiple scenes.

× My country is my country have different ethnic groups, so I like my country.

✓ My country has different ethnic groups, so I like it.

The original contains a redundant and ungrammatical structure ('My country is my country have...'). Correct structure uses a single clause with the verb 'has' to indicate possession. Also replace the repeated noun 'my country' with the pronoun 'it' to avoid repetition. Suggestion: Use 'has' to show possession (My country has...) and use pronouns to avoid redundancy.