Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer repeats the examiner's question instead of responding. Give a direct personal response (yes/no or sometimes) with a brief reason and one detail. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me capture memories. For example, I often photograph city skylines at sunset to capture the colours, and I sometimes take landscape shots when I travel.

提案: You repeated the question rather than answering. State your preference clearly (urban or rural), give one specific reason, and add a short supporting detail using a linking phrase like “because” or “for example.” Keep it concise.

例: I prefer rural views because I find nature more relaxing. For example, I like photographing rolling hills and rivers, which feel peaceful compared with crowded city scenes.

提案: The answer repeats the question and includes a grammar error (“others country”). Respond directly, choose one option or say both, and give a clear reason with a specific example. Use correct grammar and linking words like “because” or “however.”

例: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different landscapes and cultures. For instance, I enjoyed photographing coastal villages abroad that had architecture and light very different from those at home.

× Do you prefer views in your own country or in others country?

✓ Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

The error is using the plural 'others' with the singular noun 'country'. The correct phrase is 'other countries' (plural noun) or 'another country' (singular). Here the question contrasts 'your own country' with multiple other countries, so use 'other countries'. Suggestion: match singular/plural forms by using 'other countries' for plural or 'another country' for singular.