Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更自然并更直接回应问题，先给出主题句，然后用1–2句具体细节支持，并用连接词使句子连贯。避免模糊或不合逻辑的表述（例如 “funny” 在此语境中不准确）。可以说喜欢捕捉风景的原因、拍照的频率或用途（如与家人分享、记录回忆）。

例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views when I travel because it helps me remember places and share them with friends. For example, I often photograph sunsets and street scenes, then post the best shots on social media to keep a travel diary.

提案: 回答要更精确并用更自然的表达说明偏好原因。避免语法错误（如 “about the sky” 和 “in the cities”重复），使用连接词（for example, because）并给出具体例子或对比，如城市的摩天楼、夜景或乡村的宁静。

例: I prefer photographing urban views because I like the contrast between tall buildings and the sky. For example, I often capture city skylines at dusk when the lights come on and the sky looks particularly clear and colorful.

提案: 回答不完整且语法混乱，需要先给出明确答案，然后用1–2句具体理由支持。避免直译或断句不清的表述。可以说明对本国风景的熟悉、文化或历史吸引力，或举例说明某些景点。

例: I prefer photographing views in my own country because I'm more familiar with its landscapes and cultural sites. For instance, I enjoy taking pictures of historical temples and traditional festivals here, which are hard to find elsewhere.

× I can post a picture online.

✓ I often post pictures online.

原句语法上不是错误，但在上下文中时态与频率不一致。面试中学生前一句说“I like taking pictures when I travel.”随后应表达经常性行为，使用一般现在时并加频率副词更自然。建议在描述习惯时用一般现在时并加频率词（如 often, usually）。

× I think it's a funny hobby.

✓ I think it's a fun hobby.

“funny”通常表示“滑稽的、可笑的”，而描述爱好为“有趣的、好玩的”应使用“fun”。因此将“funny”改为“fun”。（简体中文建议：将表示“有趣”的形容词用对，fun 用于表示令人愉快的活动，funny 用于表示好笑的事。）

× I prefer taking pictures in the city. I often take pictures about the sky in the cities.

✓ I prefer taking pictures in the city. I often take pictures of the sky in cities.

第一句可以保留。第二句中介词应为“take pictures of”表示拍摄……，而不是“about”。此外“the cities”根据句意应泛指城市，使用复数“cities”而不用定冠词“the”，或也可用“the city”指特定城市。建议：使用固定搭配“take pictures of”。（简体中文建议：拍摄某物用固定短语 take pictures of；泛指多个城市可直接用复数 cities，不必加 the。）

× I prefer taking photographs in my country because my country. Actions already historical.

✓ I prefer taking photographs in my country because my country has a lot of historical sites.

原句存在断句和不完整的句子，且“Actions already historical”不是正确表达。需要完整表达原因，例如说明“我的国家有许多历史景点”。建议把句子合并为完整的原因状语从句，并使用正确的名词短语“historical sites”或 “historical places”。（简体中文建议：避免句子残缺，提供完整主谓结构；用“historical sites/places”来表示“历史景点”，并用 has/has got 表示拥有。）