Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答基本直接，但“prefer to handwriting”应改为“prefer handwriting”或“prefer to handwrite”。“the place of the different tours”表达不清，可能想说“键盘上不同字母的位置”；另外连续使用两个“because”显得重复。建议先说明偏好，再给出一个清晰、具体的原因，并使用“because”或“as a result”连接。

例: I prefer handwriting because I’m not very good at typing. I sometimes struggle to remember where the letters are on the keyboard, so writing by hand feels more comfortable and efficient for me.

提案: 回答中“type on my desk”应改为“type on a desktop keyboard”或“use my desktop computer”；“for every day”应改为“every day”。“I need to”重复，且“doing my homework”应改为“do my homework”。建议直接回答使用台式电脑还是笔记本，并补充日常使用的具体目的。

例: I use a laptop keyboard every day. I need it to write reports for my teachers and complete my homework, especially when I have to type long assignments.

提案: 时间是过去，应该统一使用过去时，例如“I learned”和“when I was in primary school”。“before text us”表达不清，建议改为“before we were tested on our typing skills”。回答可以说明学校开设了电脑课，或者需要通过打字考试，逻辑会更清楚。

例: I learned how to type when I was in primary school. We had computer lessons, and we had to pass a basic typing test before we were allowed to use the computers independently.

提案: 回答的主要意思可以理解，但“some no”“some sentence”和“pace of hiding”表达不准确，可能想说“some notes”“sentences”以及“typing speed”。建议直接说明练习方法，例如每天打字、抄写文章或使用打字练习网站，并用“which helps me...”连接结果。

例: I improve my typing by practising every day. I type short notes and copy sentences from articles on my computer, which helps me type more quickly and make fewer mistakes.

× I prefer to handwriting because honestly I'm not good at typing words because I can't remember the place of the different tours, so I prefer handwriting.

✓ I prefer handwriting because, honestly, I'm not good at typing words because I can't remember the place of the different tours, so I prefer handwriting.

“prefer”后面可以接动名词（prefer doing）或不定式（prefer to do），但不能接“to + handwriting”。这里的“handwriting”是动名词，应该去掉“to”。

× Yes, I type on my desk for every day because I need to I need to write a report for my teacher and doing my homework, you know?

✓ Yes, I type at my desk every day because I need to write a report for my teacher and do my homework, you know?

表示“在书桌旁或书桌前工作”时，通常使用“at my desk”，而不是“on my desk”。“every day”表示“每天”，不需要搭配介词“for”。

× I need to write a report for my teacher and doing my homework.

✓ I need to write a report for my teacher and do my homework.

“need to”后面要接动词原形。并列结构中，“write”和“do”应该保持形式一致，所以应使用“do”，不能使用“doing”。

× I learned to type when I'm in primary school.

✓ I learned to type when I was in primary school.

主句使用过去时“learned”，表示过去发生的事情，因此时间从句也应该使用过去时。“am”需要改为过去式“was”。

× because we need to pass the exam

✓ because we needed to pass the exam

这件事发生在学生过去上小学时，所以“need”应该使用过去式“needed”，与整个叙述的过去时间保持一致。

× before text us to type on the computer and how to use it

✓ before they tested us on how to type on a computer and how to use it

“text us to type”不能构成正确的英语句子结构。这里需要一个明确的主语“they”和谓语“tested”，表达“他们测试我们是否会打字以及使用电脑”。

× some sentence I like to read on my computer

✓ some sentences I like to read on my computer

“some”通常修饰可数名词复数，因此“sentence”应改为“sentences”。

× I prefer to type some no or just some sentence I like to read on my computer it can improve my pace of hiding.

✓ I prefer to type some no or just some sentences that I like to read on my computer. This can improve my pace of hiding.

原句包含两个完整句子，却没有使用句号或合适的连接词连接，形成了句子粘连错误。应在“computer”后使用句号，并将后面的句子单独表达。