Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答观点明确，也提供了原因和类比，结构基本完整。需要注意语法和搭配：应说“a more personal touch”和“a unique character”，但“handwriting has a unique character”不太自然；“express my feeling”应改为“express my feelings”或“express myself”。另外，“Just like painting”与前文衔接略突然，可以使用“Moreover”或“because”使逻辑更清晰。

例: I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and expressive. Everyone has a unique style of writing, almost like a personal signature. Moreover, writing by hand helps me express my feelings more naturally.

提案: 回答给出了明确选择和原因，但存在明显的重复、句子过长和连接问题。“my laptop laptop”是重复错误；“portable therefore”之间需要标点或连接词；“wherever and whenever I want”后面不应直接接“it can bring...”。建议使用两到三句短句，并用“so”或“This means that”表达结果，避免重复使用“laptop”。

例: I usually type on a laptop because it is portable. I can work in different places, such as a library or a café, instead of staying at a desk. This is especially convenient when I need to study outside my home.

提案: 回答直接并且细节具体，时间、场景和感受都交代得很好。主要问题是时态不一致：过去发生的事情应使用“acquired”，而不是“acquire”；“the basic skill”更自然的表达是“basic typing skills”。“excited and amazed”略显重复，可以保留一个，或补充具体原因。

例: I learned to type when I was in primary school. We had regular computer classes, where we were taught basic typing skills. I remember feeling excited because I could use a computer more independently after that.

提案: 回答包含练习方法和近期目标，内容比较切题。但“typing some letters”不够具体，可以改为“typing short passages”或“doing typing exercises”；“for ILTS examination”应为“for the IELTS examination”，且“since it's turned to computerized”应改为“because the test has become computer-delivered”。“various ways”和“mainly”放在一起略显矛盾，建议直接说明一到两个具体方法。

例: I improve my typing by doing online typing exercises and chatting with my friends. These activities help me type faster and make fewer mistakes. Recently, I have been practicing more because the IELTS test is now computer-delivered in many places.

× Well, I prefer handwriting. I think handwriting has more personal touch and it's a unique character. Just like painting it can help me to express my feeling better.

✓ Well, I prefer handwriting. I think handwriting has a more personal touch and a unique character. Just like painting, it can help me express my feelings better.

“touch”在这里是可数名词，前面需要使用冠词“a”，所以应改为“a more personal touch”。“unique character”前的“a”已经正确保留。建议注意可数名词单数前通常需要使用“a/an”或“the”。

× Well, I prefer handwriting. I think handwriting has more personal touch and it's a unique character. Just like painting it can help me to express my feeling better.

✓ Well, I prefer handwriting. I think handwriting has a more personal touch and a unique character. Just like painting, it can help me express my feelings better.

“feelings”表示个人的情感，通常使用复数形式，因此“my feeling”应改为“my feelings”。建议根据语境判断名词是表示一个具体事物，还是表示多种感受或一般概念。

× Well, as for me, I prefer to type on my laptop since my laptop laptop is portable therefore I can type wherever and whenever I want it can bring much convenience to me.

✓ Well, as for me, I prefer to type on my laptop because my laptop is portable, so I can type wherever and whenever I want. It brings me a lot of convenience.

“since”和“therefore”不能这样连用来连接同一个因果结构。应使用“because...so...”或只使用“since”。另外，原句包含多个完整句子，不能只用逗号或直接连接。建议使用“because”引出原因，再用“so”引出结果。

× Well, as for me, I prefer to type on my laptop since my laptop laptop is portable therefore I can type wherever and whenever I want it can bring much convenience to me.

✓ Well, as for me, I prefer to type on my laptop because my laptop is portable, so I can type wherever and whenever I want. It brings me a lot of convenience.

原句把多个独立分句连续放在一起，形成连句，句子结构不完整清晰。应拆分成两个句子，或使用正确的连词连接。原文中的“laptop laptop”也应删除重复词。建议每个完整句子都包含清楚的主语和谓语，并避免连续堆叠多个分句。

× I learned how to type on my computer when I was in primary school. We had computer classes where we learned the basic skill of typing. I still remember that I felt so excited and amazed when I acquire this skill.

✓ I learned how to type on my computer when I was in primary school. We had computer classes where we learned the basic skill of typing. I still remember that I felt so excited and amazed when I acquired this skill.

“when I acquired this skill”描述过去在小学学会打字的时间，因此动词应使用过去式“acquired”，不能使用现在时“acquire”。建议讲述过去发生的经历时，保持动词时态一致。

× As for me, I improve my typing in various ways, for instance, mainly by typing some letters or chatting with my friends. Recently, I have been busy practicing my typing for ILTS examination since it's turned to computerized.

✓ As for me, I improve my typing in various ways, mainly by typing some letters or chatting with my friends. Recently, I have been busy practicing my typing for the IELTS examination since it has become computer-based.

“IELTS examination”在这里指特定的考试，通常需要使用定冠词“the”，所以应改为“the IELTS examination”。另外，“ILTS”是拼写错误，正确拼写是“IELTS”。建议在表示特定考试、课程或活动时，检查是否需要使用“the”。

× As for me, I improve my typing in various ways, for instance, mainly by typing some letters or chatting with my friends. Recently, I have been busy practicing my typing for ILTS examination since it's turned to computerized.

✓ As for me, I improve my typing in various ways, mainly by typing some letters or chatting with my friends. Recently, I have been busy practicing my typing for the IELTS examination since it has become computer-based.

“turn to computerized”搭配不正确。表示“已经变成电脑化的”应使用“has become computer-based”。这里描述的是从过去到现在已经发生的变化，因此使用现在完成时“has become”更准确。建议记住“become + 形容词”或“become + 名词”的搭配。