Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 句子有语法和用词问题，表达也稍显冗长。应使用正确的比较结构（prefer A to B），将观点作为主题句，然后用一到两句具体理由支持，使用连接词使衔接更自然。注意拼写（old-fashioned）和复数或单词形式（shortcuts）。

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it’s much more convenient. For example, on a computer I can quickly copy and paste text and use spell-check, which saves time and reduces mistakes.

提案: 回答没有直接回应“desktop or laptop”的问题，语法混乱（例如时态和动词形式），信息重复且不够简洁。应先直接回答（laptop），然后用一到两句具体原因支持，避免不必要重复并修正语法。

例: I use a laptop keyboard every day because I own a MacBook and don’t have a desktop. The laptop keyboard is built-in and easy to carry, so it suits my study and travel needs.

提案: 回答有时间点但细节不够清晰，存在语法错误（remembered 用法、双写to、主谓一致）。应用一两句说明具体情境或原因，并用连接词增强逻辑。避免模糊或夸张的词如“compulsory”未解释清楚。

例: I learned to type when I was thirteen, during primary school, because my school required students to use laptops for homework. Since then I practiced regularly so I could keep up with assignments.

提案: 回答未完成且结构混乱，时态混用（improved vs improve），表达不连贯。应先直接说方法（e.g. regular practice, online courses, typing tests），然后举具体例子和频率。使用连词使句子完整并注意动词形式（teach → teach/that teach）。

例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly, for example doing 15–20 minute typing exercises every day. I also watch tutorial videos and use online typing tests to monitor my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing than handwriting because I find handwriting a bit too old fashion, and typing is just way more convenient as there is shortcuts you can use such as copy and paste.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because I find handwriting a bit old-fashioned, and typing is much more convenient since there are shortcuts you can use, such as copy and paste.

错误类型：介词使用错误（与介词“than/ to”的混用）。应使用“prefer A to B”结构而不是“prefer A than B”。另外有其它小错误：'old fashion' 应为复合形容词 'old-fashioned'，'way more' 可以更正式地改为 'much more'，'there is shortcuts' 主谓不一致，应为 'there are shortcuts'，并在列举示例时用逗号分隔。建议记住固定搭配 'prefer A to B'，注意主谓一致和复合形容词拼写。

× I prefer a keyboard because I have never experienced or saw a desktop in my life and the device I use is MacBook so you So using a keyboard is just compulsory because it's connected to your computer.

✓ I prefer a laptop keyboard because I have never seen a desktop in my life, and the device I use is a MacBook, so using a keyboard is essential because it's connected to my computer.

错误类型：代词和代词指代/词形问题。'experienced or saw' 用词不当，应为 'seen'（see 的过去分词/过去式）而不是 'experienced' 或 'saw' 的混用；'the device I use is MacBook' 缺少不定冠词 'a' 和品牌前的冠词；'so you So' 是多余重复并且代词指代不清；'compulsory' 用在此上下文不太自然，用 'essential' 更合适；'it's connected to your computer' 中的 'your' 与主语不一致，应改为 'my'。建议注意代词一致性、动词时态和冠词使用。

× I learnt how to type on a keyboard at the age of thirteen when I was in primary school. I remembered how we have to buy a MacBook to to complete our homework. That just means that experimenting with keyboards are just essential and compulsory.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard at the age of thirteen when I was in primary school. I remember that we had to buy a MacBook to complete our homework. That just means that experimenting with keyboards was essential and compulsory.

错误类型：过去时使用错误与主谓一致问题。句子时态混用：前句使用过去时 'learnt'，随后用 'I remembered' 可改为现在时 'I remember' 根据说话语境可用现在时或过去时，但原句 'I remembered how we have to buy' 中 'have to' 应为过去时 'had to'。此外 'to to' 为重复错误，'experimenting with keyboards are' 主谓不一致，主语是单数或不可数动名词短语，应使用 'was'。建议统一时态（回忆过去用过去时或现在完成时），注意重复词删除和主谓一致。

× I improved my typing break practicing. Practice makes perfect to practice you can search on YouTube or any social media to find videos that teaches people how to type. Just to do exercises and watching the videos, I believe we

✓ I improved my typing by practicing. Practice makes perfect. To practice, you can search on YouTube or any social media to find videos that teach people how to type. Just do the exercises and watch the videos, I believe we...

错误类型：动词 + -ing 形式与不定式/介词混用错误。'break practicing' 是不正确的表达，应为 'by practicing' 使用介词短语；'videos that teaches' 主谓不一致，应该是 'videos that teach'；'Just to do exercises and watching the videos' 中不定式和动名词并列不一致，应统一为动词原形或动名词，前文建议改为 'Just do the exercises and watch the videos'。建议掌握常见介词搭配（by practicing）、关系从句主谓一致规则以及并列动词形式一致性。