Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be concise, correct grammar, and give a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and informal phrasing. Also correct errors (e.g., “a modern teenager in my 20s” is odd).

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I can quickly edit and organize my notes on a laptop, and I can easily share them with classmates, which helps me study more effectively.

提案: Give a direct topic sentence and use clearer time expressions and linking words. Fix grammar (e.g., “some few years” -> “a few years later”; “gadgets” -> “devices”). Be specific about frequency or reasons. Keep to 2-3 sentences.

例: I usually type on my phone and laptop every day. Since 2021 I mainly used my phone, but a few years later I started using my laptop too because it’s more comfortable for long tasks.

提案: Start with a clear, concise answer and give a brief supporting detail with correct grammar and a linking phrase. Use more precise phrasing: “in sixth grade” and avoid filler phrases like “to be honest” unless necessary.

例: I learned to type in sixth grade. I don’t remember the exact age, but I started practicing regularly at school, which helped me build speed over time.

提案: Provide a clear method or steps you use to improve, use linking words and correct grammar. Avoid vague statements; give specific practices (e.g., regular practice, online drills, posture). Keep to two or three sentences.

例: I improve my typing by practicing daily with online typing exercises and using apps that track accuracy and speed. In addition, I focus on proper posture and regular short practice sessions to gradually increase my speed without making more errors.

× As modern teenager in 20s, of course I will choose typing.

✓ As a modern teenager in my 20s, of course I will choose typing.

Missing definite/indefinite articles and possessive: 'modern teenager' needs the indefinite article 'a', and 'in 20s' should be 'in my 20s' to show possession/age. Use 'a' before singular countable nouns and include 'my' for age reference.

× In my opinion, it's more easier and effective for me to express my feelings, what I'm thinking about or something else.

✓ In my opinion, it's easier and more effective for me to express my feelings, what I'm thinking about, or other things.

'More easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is already the comparative form; use either 'more' with a multi-syllable adjective or the comparative form alone. Also 'effective' should be 'more effective' when compared, and 'something else' is vague—'other things' fits better. Added commas for clarity.

× From 2021 I started typing only on my phone, but in some few years I actually started typing additionally on laptop.

✓ Since 2021 I started typing only on my phone, but after a few years I actually also started typing on a laptop.

'From 2021' is awkward for a start point — use 'since 2021' or 'in 2021'. 'some few years' is incorrect; 'a few years' is natural. 'additionally' misplaced; 'also' works. 'on laptop' needs the article 'a'.

× Now I can type on both of gadgets and both of them is good for me.

✓ Now I can type on both gadgets and both of them are good for me.

'Both of them is' has wrong verb agreement: use 'are' with plural subject. Also 'both of gadgets' is unidiomatic; say 'both gadgets' or 'both of them'.

× To be honest, I don't remember actually when I started, but I can tell that I started using keyboard in my 6th grade.

✓ To be honest, I don't actually remember when I started, but I can say that I started using a keyboard in my sixth grade.

Word order: 'don't actually remember' is more natural. 'Using keyboard' needs the article 'a keyboard'. 'in my 6th grade' should be 'in my sixth grade' (write out ordinal) or 'in sixth grade'.

× Typing is very easy activity in which there is no need for taking a course for that or something else you just started to type on laptop or in on phone and just enhance your skills.

✓ Typing is a very easy activity in which there is no need to take a course; you can just start typing on a laptop or on a phone and improve your skills.

Missing article before 'very easy activity' — use 'a'. 'No need for taking a course' should be 'no need to take a course'. 'For that or something else' is unclear and unnecessary. 'Started to type' incorrect tense/structure — 'start typing'. 'on laptop' needs 'a laptop'. 'in on phone' is incorrect preposition sequence — use 'on a phone'. 'Enhance' is formal; 'improve' fits better in this context.