Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更直接并结构化。开头给出直接观点，然后用一两句具体细节支持，避免语法错误和冗余；注意时态和代词的使用，改用更自然的表达。可以把不必要的信息删掉或简化。比如把“treat my handwriting”和“the last I I'm always in the wrong handwriting posture”改为更地道的表达。

例: I prefer handwriting because I feel it helps me think more clearly. For example, when I brainstorm or take notes by hand I can organise ideas better. However, my handwriting is messy, so my father once enrolled me in a penmanship class when I was a child to improve it.

提案: 回答要流畅并避免重复。直接回应之后用一两句说明原因和场景，注意主谓一致（"my work needs"），把“typewriting”替换为更常用的词如“by email”或"by typing"。

例: Yes, I type on a laptop every day because my job requires constant written communication. For instance, I usually email colleagues and reply to customers using chat or email throughout the day.

提案: 回答要更确定并使用正确语法。给出清楚的时间点并用一两句补充细节，使用过去时描述过去事件，避免“maybe”造成不确定感。

例: I learned to type when I was in primary school, around age eight. My school introduced a basic computer course where we practised touch-typing and simple word processing tasks.

提案: 回答要具体说明练习方法并使用连贯的连接词。避免含糊的词语如“maybe”。可以描述练习频率、工具（如在线练习网站）、目标（提高速度或准确性）以及进步情况。

例: I improved my typing mainly through regular practice. For example, I used online typing drills for 20 minutes a day and focused on accuracy before speed; over several months my words-per-minute increased and my errors decreased.

× I prefer handwriting even though I am not very good at it.

✓ I prefer handwriting even though I am not very good at it.

此句没有涉及动词 + -ing 的错误，保留原句。

× When I was a kid my father sent me to a handwriting course to treat my handwriting and even the last I I'm always in the wrong handwriting posture.

✓ When I was a kid my father sent me to a handwriting course to improve my handwriting, but even until recently I have often had the wrong handwriting posture.

原句结构混乱，使用了不恰当的短语“to treat my handwriting”和“even the last I I'm”。建议用“to improve my handwriting”表示“提高/改善书写”，并用“but even until recently I have often had...”表达“直到最近我仍常常姿势不正确”。时态用现在完成时（have had）表示从过去持续到现在的情况。

× Yes, yes, I need to type on the laptop keyboard every day because my work need to do it.

✓ Yes, yes, I need to type on the laptop keyboard every day because my work needs me to.

原句中主语“my work”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应为“needs”。另外不自然的表达“need to do it”改为“needs me to”更符合英语习惯，或可改为“because my job requires it”。

× I always communicate with my colleagues or customers in typewriting.

✓ I always communicate with my colleagues or customers by typing.

“in typewriting”用法不自然，应使用方式状语短语“by typing”或“via email/typing”。这里改为“by typing”。

× Maybe in my primary school there are new computer course in my school and I need to learn how to type on the computer.

✓ Maybe in primary school there was a new computer course at my school and I needed to learn how to type on the computer.

原句时态不一致。描述过去发生的事情应使用过去时：用“was”而不是“are”，并把“need”改为过去时“needed”。另外“in my primary school”与“in my school”重复，可简化为“at my school”。

× How do you improve your typing?

✓ How do you improve your typing?

该问题句本身无语法错误，保留原句。

× Maybe just practice, In the first I had to type in faster but after long time practice I'm good at it now.

✓ Maybe just practice. At first I had to type faster, but after a long time of practice I'm good at it now.

原句存在标点与时态小问题。将“In the first”改为“At first”表示“起初”，将“type in faster”改为“type faster”。“after long time practice”改为“after a long time of practice”。整体分两句更自然。时态使用过去时“had to”描述过去的努力，现已熟练用现在时“I'm good at it now”。