Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct sentence fragments, and give one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid redundancy and fix tense/word order errors.

例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me organize my thoughts more clearly. For example, when I prepare for exams or research projects, I make handwritten outlines first, which makes it easier to plan and remember key points.

提案: Provide a direct topic sentence and then give two clear, linked details. Correct awkward phrasing and run-on sentences, use linking words like 'and' or 'also', and be specific about when you use each device.

例: I use both a desktop and a laptop depending on the task. For instance, I use my desktop at home for long writing sessions and my laptop when I need to work on the go, and I also keep a paper diary to plan my day.

提案: Start with a clear time reference and fix grammar (articles and verb forms). Add one specific detail about age or grade and link reason with 'because' to strengthen coherence.

例: I learned to type during my childhood, when I took computer classes at school. Around age ten, we practiced typing for research projects and class presentations, which improved my speed and accuracy.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence and then specific methods. Avoid filler words like 'obviously' and provide examples of practice techniques and frequency using linking words (for example, 'for instance' or 'so').

例: I improve my typing mainly by regular practice. For example, I use online typing exercises for 20 minutes a day and type emails and reports frequently so I maintain speed and accuracy.

× Personally, I prefer handwriting because it gives me the opportunity to organize my thought clearly.

✓ Personally, I prefer handwriting because it gives me the opportunity to organize my thoughts clearly.

The noun 'thought' should be plural 'thoughts' because 'organize my thoughts' refers to multiple ideas; this is an article/number issue. Use plural when referring to ideas in general. Suggestion: say 'organize my thoughts clearly.'

× For example, I when I have any exam or research projects, I prefer to start.

✓ For example, when I have an exam or a research project, I prefer to start by planning.

Original sentence has misplaced 'I' and incorrect article/number. Remove the extraneous 'I' and change 'any exam or research projects' to 'an exam or a research project' to match singular. Add 'by planning' to complete the idea and improve sentence structure. Suggestion: place time clause 'when I have...' at start and use correct articles.

× I use both sometimes because of my work.

✓ I use both sometimes because of my work.

Sentence is acceptable but context could be clearer; no grammatical change required. It's included to indicate no error from the provided list.

× I need to work on the laptop and write some documents and it during my day I love to write in the diary about my plan.

✓ I need to work on my laptop and write some documents, and during the day I like to write in my diary about my plans.

Several issues: use 'my laptop' (possessive), remove redundant 'the' before 'laptop', change 'it during my day' (awkward phrase) to 'during the day', change 'love to write in the diary about my plan' to 'like to write in my diary about my plans' (pronoun and plural). These are preposition/pronoun and article and singular/plural problems. Suggestion: use 'my laptop', 'during the day', and plural 'plans'.

× During my childhood as we used to have computer classes in the school and use it for doing some research projects and presentations.

✓ During my childhood we used to have computer classes at school and use them to do research projects and presentations.

Use 'at school' rather than 'in the school' (preposition). 'Computer classes' is plural so refer to them with 'them' not 'it'. Change 'for doing' to 'to do' for natural infinitive use. These are preposition and pronoun and verb form corrections. Suggestion: say 'we used to have computer classes at school and use them to do research projects and presentations.'

× By practicing obviously, because once you stop typing on the laptop or computer, you will lose the habit and you will struggle to follow your peers.

✓ Obviously, by practicing, because once you stop typing on a laptop or computer, you will lose the habit and struggle to keep up with your peers.

Improve word order and article usage: 'on the laptop or computer' -> 'on a laptop or computer' (general reference). 'You will struggle to follow your peers' is awkward; 'struggle to keep up with your peers' is idiomatic. Also remove redundant 'you' before 'will struggle'. These are article, sentence structure and word choice issues. Suggestion: use general articles and idiomatic expression 'keep up with.'