Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cải thiện điểm ngữ pháp nhỏ (loại bỏ từ lặp), rút gọn câu để tự nhiên hơn và thêm liên kết rõ ràng giữa ý thích và lý do. Cụ thể: tránh lặp từ (“the the”), dùng tối đa 4–5 câu, bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng rồi bổ trợ bằng ví dụ ngắn. Thêm từ nối như “for example” hoặc “as a result” một cách tiết chế.

例: I prefer handwriting because I enjoy the physical sensation of holding a pen and find it helps me remember information better. For example, when I take notes during lectures, I retain more than when I type, so I often write key points by hand to study later.

提案: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và chọn từ chính xác hơn (ví dụ: “use my laptop every day” thay vì “turn my laptop every day”, “work in an office”). Viết câu ngắn gọn, thêm một mệnh đề liên kết để làm rõ tần suất và hoàn cảnh sử dụng.

例: I use my laptop every day because I work in an office and most of my tasks involve writing emails and preparing documents. Therefore, I usually type on my laptop during working hours.

提案: Cải thiện lựa chọn từ (ví dụ: “typing techniques” thay vì “timing techniques”) và tách câu dài thành hai câu ngắn để rõ ràng hơn. Nên thêm liên kết ngữ cảnh như “as a result” để nối ý luyện tập với kết quả tiến bộ.

例: I learned to type when I was in secondary school. In our IT classes the teacher taught typing techniques and we practised with exercises, so as a result my speed improved quickly.

提案: Sửa ngữ pháp, thứ tự từ và ý rõ ràng hơn: tránh lặp lộ trình (“in the office”), chia ý thành câu rõ ràng, dùng thì đúng (past vs present), và nêu phương pháp cụ thể để cải thiện (ví dụ: luyện với phần mềm, đặt mục tiêu tốc độ). Viết 2–3 câu ngắn gọn, có từ nối như “now” và “therefore”.

例: At first I practised typing with simple exercises at school, but now I improve my skills by using online typing programs and practising every day at work. As a result, my speed and accuracy have gradually increased.

× I would say that I prefer handwriting because I enjoy the the physical sensation of holding a pen and writing on paper.

✓ I would say that I prefer handwriting because I enjoy the physical sensation of holding a pen and writing on paper.

Duplicate word 'the the' is a typographical error; remove the extra 'the'. Use of 'physical' as adjective is correct.

× It also helps me remember information better.

✓ It also helps me remember information better.

Sentence is grammatically correct in present tense; no change needed.

× For example, when I take notes during lectures, I retain more than when I type.

✓ For example, when I take notes during lectures, I retain more information than when I type.

Comparative phrase 'retain more' is incomplete without an object. Add 'information' to clarify what is retained.

× I turn my laptop every day because I work in office and most of my tasks require writing emails and preparing documents, so I usually use my laptop keyboard during working hours.

✓ I use my laptop every day because I work in an office and most of my tasks require writing emails and preparing documents, so I usually use my laptop keyboard during working hours.

Verb 'turn' is incorrect for habitual use; use 'use'. Missing article before 'office' — 'an office'. Subject-verb agreement and word choice corrected.

× I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was in secondary school.

✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was in secondary school.

Sentence is correct in past tense; no change needed.

× We had IT classes and the teacher showed us proper timing techniques and we practiced with typing exercises which helped me improve quickly.

✓ We had IT classes and the teacher showed us proper typing techniques, and we practiced with typing exercises which helped me improve quickly.

Use 'proper typing techniques' instead of 'proper timing techniques' — 'timing' is likely a word choice error. Added comma before conjunction for clarity.

× I would say that at first I just practice the typing exercise when I was in school, but now I have to work as office in the office so I have time every single day.

✓ I would say that at first I just practiced typing exercises when I was in school, but now I work in an office and I have time to practice every day.

Mixed tenses: 'at first' refers to past so use past tense 'practiced'. 'the typing exercise' → plural 'typing exercises'. 'work as office' is incorrect; use 'work in an office'. 'have time every single day' clarified to 'have time to practice every day'.

× So it's just increase my skills.

✓ So it just increases my skills.

Verb form wrong: use third person singular present 'increases' to agree with subject 'it'. Alternatively 'It just helps me improve my skills' would be more natural.