Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap kısa ve anlaşılır; fakat dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. Bağlaçları ve daha düzgün cümle yapılarını kullanarak akıcılığı artır. Örneğin, "'cause" yerine "because" kullan, "more compact thing" yerine "more efficient/compact" de. Ayrıca bir konu cümlesiyle direkt cevap verip ardından 1–2 destekleyici cümle ekle (maksimum 5 cümle).

例: I prefer typing because writing by hand is tiring and makes it hard for me to concentrate. In addition, typing is more efficient and produces neater, more compact text. For these reasons I usually choose a keyboard over handwriting.

提案: Cevap doğrudan ama çelişkili ifadeler içeriyor (günlük olarak masaüstü kullanıyorum ama dizüstü tercih ederdim). Netlik için önce durumunu belirt, sonra tercih nedenini açıkla. Bağlaçlarla mantığı kuvvetlendir ve gereksiz tekrarları çıkar.

例: I use a desktop keyboard every day because I own a desktop computer. However, if I had a choice I would prefer a laptop keyboard for portability and convenience when working in different places.

提案: Cümle yapısı ve zaman kullanımı sorunlu; "in my childhood" iyi ama tekrarlı ifadeler ve belirsiz sözcükler var (umm). Daha net zaman ifadesi ver ve nedenini açıkla. Gereksiz tekrarları çıkar ve dilbilgisine dikkat et (which made me use them more).

例: I learned to type when I was a child because computers were easily accessible at home and at school. As a result, I started practicing early and became comfortable using a keyboard.

提案: Cevap kısa ve belirsiz; spesifik kaynaklar ve yöntemler verilmesi gerekiyor. Uygulamaların veya web sitelerinin isimlerini, nasıl çalıştıklarını ve nasıl düzenli pratik yaptığını belirt. Dilbilgisi düzeltmeleri: "WeChat has a timer" ve "a countdown timer" gibi ifadeler kullan.

例: I improve my typing by using online practice sites and apps that provide timed exercises. For example, I use a typing website with a countdown timer and accuracy tracking, and I practice for 15–20 minutes every day to increase my speed and reduce errors.

× I prefer typing 'cause it's really hard to write for me.

✓ I prefer typing because writing is really hard for me.

The original uses an informal contraction and awkward structure. Use 'because' for formality and keep parallel gerunds: 'prefer typing' vs 'writing is really hard'. This clarifies meaning and keeps correct -ing forms.

× It's very tiring and I can't really concentrate on the subjects when I'm writing.

✓ It's very tiring, and I can't really concentrate on the subjects when I write.

Use simple present 'when I write' for habitual actions rather than present continuous 'when I'm writing'. This is standard for routines and repeated situations.

× Also typing in my opinion is more compact thing.

✓ Also, in my opinion, typing is more compact.

The original has incorrect word order and an unnecessary noun 'thing'. Move the phrase 'in my opinion' and use the adjective 'compact' directly after the subject to form a correct sentence.

× I type on a desktop keyboard every day because I own a desktop computer and not a laptop.

✓ I type on a desktop keyboard every day because I own a desktop computer, not a laptop.

Remove 'and' which creates redundancy; a comma with 'not a laptop' is clearer to contrast the two items.

× Also, because of the convenience, I think I would prefer laptop keyboard rather than a desktop keyboard.

✓ Also, because of the convenience, I think I would prefer a laptop keyboard rather than a desktop keyboard.

Add the article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard' to make the noun phrase grammatical; 'would prefer' is acceptable for preference, but include the article.

× I learned typing on a keyboard in my childhood because when I was a child it was easy to access, umm computers, which is made me use them shortly.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard in my childhood because computers were easy to access then, which made me use them often.

Use the infinitive 'learned to type' not 'learned typing'. Fix tense and word order: 'computers were easy to access then' is clearer. 'Which made me use them often' replaces awkward 'made me use them shortly' and uses past tense consistently.

× There are websites on the Internet that you can use.

✓ There are websites on the Internet that you can use.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. It already uses correct subject-verb agreement and relative clause.

× WeChat have a timer on them and it has a timer comes backwards with the words you type.

✓ WeChat has a timer, and it shows a countdown with the words you type.

Use singular verb 'has' to agree with singular noun 'WeChat'. Replace awkward phrase 'has a timer comes backwards' with 'shows a countdown' to convey meaning clearly and use proper word order.