Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct grammar (use present simple, articles, and conditionals) and avoid redundancy.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and easier to edit. For example, if I make a mistake I can just use backspace, whereas with handwriting I often have to cross out or start over.

提案: Be specific and grammatically accurate. Begin with a direct answer (yes/no + which), then briefly explain what you do and why. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., "data entry" or "financial data") and correct articles/phrasing.

例: Yes, I use a laptop keyboard every day because my desk job involves data entry for financial records. As an accounting associate, I regularly type invoices and transaction details.

提案: Use the correct tense for past events and be concise. Start with a clear time reference, then give one or two relevant details. Fix grammar (use past simple, singular/plural nouns) and avoid repeating "basic".

例: I learned to type when I was in secondary school because we had a computer class. The course taught basic typing skills and how to use common software.

提案: Clarify the timeline and describe specific methods you use to improve. Use correct dates and tenses (past simple for when you started, present simple for ongoing actions). Mention concrete practice activities (online lessons, daily practice, shortcuts) and results.

例: I started improving my typing when I began my job in 2017 because it was essential for entering financial data. Since then I practice daily, use online typing tutors to increase speed, and learn keyboard shortcuts to work more efficiently.

× I do prepare typing because it's way easier than handwriting and you can erase it anytime.

✓ I prepare by typing because it is much easier than handwriting and you can erase mistakes anytime.

The phrase 'do prepare typing' uses an incorrect verb form and auxiliary. Use 'prepare by typing' or simply 'I type' to express the habitual action. 'Way' is informal; use 'much' and include 'mistakes' for clarity. Use 'it is' instead of contraction to match formality if desired.

× If you have mistake and like handwriting you will redo it all over again.

✓ If you make a mistake and like handwriting, you will have to redo it all over again.

'Have mistake' is incorrect; use the verb 'make' with singular 'a mistake'. Also add a comma before the conditional clause. Include 'have to' to show obligation/context and 'redo it all over again' is acceptable though slightly redundant; keep for emphasis if preferred.

× Yes, I type on a keyboard or a laptop every day because I have a desk job which requires encoding and my basic task is to encode as a finance.

✓ Yes, I type on a keyboard or a laptop every day because I have a desk job that requires data entry, and my basic task is to encode financial information.

'Requires encoding' is awkward; use 'requires data entry' or 'requires encoding data'. 'Encode as a finance' is ungrammatical: use 'encode financial information' or 'work in finance'. Preposition 'as' is incorrect here.

× I learned how to type on a keyboard since I was in my secondary education because it's part of our subject which is computer subject and it requires a basic typing skills and a basic knowledge on how to use a computer.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in secondary school because it was part of our computer class, and it required basic typing skills and basic knowledge of how to use a computer.

Use 'when' (or 'while') rather than 'since' with a past time. 'Secondary education' is better as 'secondary school'. 'Computer subject' should be 'computer class'. 'Requires' should be past tense 'required' to match 'learned'. 'A basic typing skills' is incorrect number: use 'basic typing skills' (no 'a'). Use 'knowledge of' not 'knowledge on'.

× When I start my job since 20/20/17, I start improving my typing because it is part of my main responsibility on encoding financial data because I am a accounting associate so it requires.

✓ Since I started my job on 20/20/17, I have been improving my typing because encoding financial data is one of my main responsibilities; I am an accounting associate, so it is required.

Tense and form errors: use 'Since I started' (past) and present perfect 'have been improving' to show ongoing improvement from that time. Date needs correct preposition 'on'. 'Main responsibility on encoding' is incorrect; use 'one of my main responsibilities' or 'my main responsibility is encoding'. 'A accounting' should be 'an accounting' but better 'an accounting associate'. End clause 'so it requires' incomplete; clarify 'so it is required'.