Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, word order) and avoid redundant phrases.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because my penmanship is poor. Also, typing makes my messages clearer for other people, so they are less likely to misunderstand what I mean.

提案: Start with a direct answer and use concise reasons with correct phrasing. Avoid repetition and check tense and pronoun use. Use a linking word to connect reasons.

例: I usually type on a laptop every day because it is portable and convenient for work. Moreover, it takes up less space than a desktop, so I can work from different locations.

提案: Provide a clear time statement first, then one specific detail about how you learned. Improve grammar (use past tense, correct noun phrases) and avoid vague phrases like 'using'.

例: I learned to type during senior high school when I studied an Information and Communication Technology course. That course gave me regular practice with keyboards and taught me how to use different software and devices.

提案: Give a structured answer: state the main method, then give specific examples of practice and tools. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'also' and be specific about activities.

例: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice. For example, I do timed typing exercises online for 15–20 minutes each day and copy documents to practice accuracy. Also, using a personal laptop helps because I can practise whenever I have free time.

× It also helps other people to understand what I'm going to communicate to them because if I do handwrite it may be confused them or it may be a medium of a noise they can.

✓ It also helps other people understand what I'm trying to communicate to them, because if I handwrite, it may confuse them or create noise that makes it harder to read.

Pronoun and object order errors: 'confused them' uses incorrect word order; correct is 'confuse them' (verb + object). 'I'm going to communicate to them' is awkward; 'I'm trying to communicate to them' is clearer. 'A medium of a noise they can' is ungrammatical; rephrase as 'create noise that makes it harder to read.' Suggestion: keep verb + object order and use clear verb forms and noun phrases.

× In my everyday routine at my work I usually use laptop because it is much more convenient and you can bring bring it everywhere you were go.

✓ In my everyday routine at work I usually use a laptop because it is much more convenient and you can bring it everywhere you go.

Article and word choice errors: 'use laptop' needs an article: 'use a laptop' (Article errors, ID 22). Double word 'bring bring' is a repetition error (not in list) corrected. 'You were go' is wrong tense/word order; correct is 'you go.' Suggestion: include articles before singular countable nouns and avoid repeated words.

× Additionally, it is much more convenient than using a desktop.

✓ Additionally, it is much more convenient than using a desktop.

No grammatical correction needed; sentence is acceptable. Included here to show it meets checklist: pronoun reference 'it' clearly refers to 'a laptop.' No change required.

× It is when during Senior High School because I took Information Communication technology strand which helps me improves my typing and using the different gadgets or platforms.

✓ I learned during senior high school because I took the Information and Communication Technology strand, which helped me improve my typing and using different gadgets and platforms.

Sentence structure and verb form problems: 'It is when during' is ungrammatical—recast as 'I learned during.' Missing article before the subject: 'the Information and Communication Technology strand' (Article errors, ID 22). 'Helps me improves' mixes present and incorrect verb form; correct past 'helped me improve.' 'Using the different gadgets or platforms' is awkward; use 'using different gadgets and platforms.' Suggestion: use clear subject-verb structure, correct tense consistency, and proper articles.

× Additionally, it also helps me to be improved technically and using.

✓ Additionally, it also helped me improve technically and become more comfortable using technology.

Pronoun and verb form issues: 'helps me to be improved' is passive and awkward; better to use active form 'helped me improve.' 'And using' is incomplete; specify what is being used: 'using technology.' Maintain tense consistency with previous sentence (past tense). Suggestion: prefer active voice and complete verb phrases.

× Well, it is by practice everything that you need to be improved of.

✓ Well, it is by practising everything that you need to improve.

Incorrect verb form and preposition: 'by practice' should be 'by practising' (verb + -ing form, ID 8) or 'with practice.' 'Need to be improved of' is ungrammatical; correct is 'need to improve.' Suggestion: use 'practise/practicing' as a gerund after 'by' and avoid unnecessary prepositions.

× It requires daily practice or daily engagement of that certain skills that you wanted to umm improve.

✓ It requires daily practice or daily engagement with the specific skills you want to improve.

Tense and preposition errors: 'you wanted to umm improve' mixes past tense 'wanted' with present context; use present 'want.' 'Engagement of that certain skills' uses wrong preposition and determiners; correct is 'engagement with the specific skills.' Suggestion: keep tense consistent with general truths (present tense) and use correct prepositions and determiners.

× Also, by having a laptop or a desktop, it may help you improve because you have.

✓ Also, having a laptop or a desktop may help you improve because you have access to the necessary tools.

Incomplete sentence and structure error: 'because you have' is a sentence fragment lacking an object. Rephrase to complete the thought: 'because you have access to the necessary tools.' Suggestion: ensure clauses have complete objects and finish the idea.