Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and direct: start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons connected with examples. Reduce fillers (uh, um) and avoid vague phrases like 'I want to'. Use linking words (however, but) to contrast handwriting and typing.

例: I prefer handwriting because I find it helps me remember information better. However, I also type often since many tasks, such as emails and assignments, require a computer; for example, I type reports for school because it is faster and easier to edit.

提案: Begin with a clear statement answering the question (desktop or laptop), then give reasons and use specific details. Avoid tense mistakes and filler words. Use linking words like 'now' or 'because' to connect ideas and use more precise adjectives (faster, more accurate).

例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day. I started using a laptop recently because it is portable and I can work anywhere; as a result, my typing has become faster and more accurate.

提案: Provide a clear time reference (e.g., a year or stage of life) and describe how you learned using simple past or present perfect correctly. Avoid repeating negatives and use linking phrases like 'at first' and 'over time' to structure the answer.

例: I started learning to type a few years ago when I began university. At first I learned slowly by practicing a little each day, and over time my speed and accuracy improved.

提案: Answer directly with methods you use to improve typing (practice, online lessons, typing software) and add specific details and results. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'as a result' and avoid vague or unclear phrases like 'lesson able'.

例: I improve my typing by practicing on my laptop every day and using online typing lessons. For example, I use a typing tutor website for 15 minutes daily, which has helped increase my speed and reduce errors.

× Actually, I prefer handwriting, uh, but nowadays, uh, the system is more updated and everything depends on typing, so now also people's preferred typing as I hurry, uh, I want to, uh.

✓ Actually, I prefer handwriting, but nowadays the system is more up to date and everything depends on typing, so people now prefer typing when they are in a hurry.

The original sentence uses incorrect possessive/pronoun constructions ('people's preferred typing as I hurry') and awkward phrasing. Replace 'people's preferred typing as I hurry' with 'people now prefer typing when they are in a hurry' to use correct pronouns and clarify meaning. Also change 'more updated' to 'more up to date' (see article 13/adjective usage).

× Before I never used any laptop or desktop, but nowadays I uh, trying to uh, use the laptop everyday and I also writing on laptop uh because my writing speed is uh uh, more good.

✓ Before I never used a laptop or desktop, but nowadays I am trying to use a laptop every day and I also write on the laptop because my writing speed is better.

Errors include incorrect verb forms and continuous tense use. Use present continuous 'am trying' for current attempt. Use base form 'write' after 'also' rather than 'writing'. Use article 'a' before 'laptop' and 'every day' as two words. Replace 'more good' with comparative 'better'.

× I not prepared, I not property properly learn.

✓ I was not prepared; I did not learn properly.

Negation and tense are incorrect. Use past tense 'was not prepared' and auxiliary 'did not learn' with base verb 'learn'. 'Property' is incorrect word choice; use 'properly'.

× I learn it time by time after.

✓ I learned it gradually over time.

Tense and idiom are incorrect. Use past tense 'learned' to match past context and natural phrase 'gradually over time' instead of 'time by time after'.

× Before I not using laptop so I don't have any experience and now I learning with the time.

✓ Before I did not use a laptop so I did not have any experience, and now I am learning with time.

Use past simple 'did not use' and 'did not have' for past negative. Use present continuous 'am learning' for ongoing action. Add article 'a' before 'laptop'.

× I improve my typing by uh laptop.

✓ I improve my typing using a laptop.

Preposition use and verb form: 'by laptop' is unnatural; 'using a laptop' is correct. Add article 'a'.

× I typing it daily and improve my typing speed and my grammar mistakes also make me umm lesson able so I daily use my laptop for typing.

✓ I type daily to improve my typing speed, and practicing also helps me reduce grammar mistakes, so I use my laptop every day for typing.

Multiple issues: use simple present 'type' for habitual action, rephrase to show purpose 'to improve'. 'My grammar mistakes also make me umm lesson able' is unclear; replace with 'practicing also helps me reduce grammar mistakes'. Use 'every day' and 'use my laptop for typing' for clarity.