Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答应更自然且语法正确，开头直接给出立场，然后用一两句具体理由支持。注意时态和动词形式，避免冗长或重复。可以提到为什么手写对你有好处（如记忆、创意），并用连词连接。

例: I prefer handwriting. It helps me remember information better and makes me feel more creative when taking notes, so I still write by hand whenever I can.

提案: 回答需要更地道、简洁并注意语法（冠词、时态和词序）。先直接回答，然后给一到两句具体原因，使用连词如 because 或 so 来连接。避免不必要的短语。

例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because my laptop is portable and I don't own a desktop computer.

提案: 注意时间表达和动词时态（过去式）。回答要简洁，先给出时间点，然后说明原因或背景，用连词使句子通顺。避免冗长措辞如 “that time”。

例: I learned to type when I was five years old. My father bought a laptop then, so I began practising typing on it.

提案: 回答过于简短且有语法错误。应先完整回答，然后补充具体方法或频率，使用连词举例说明，例如通过在线课程、练习软件或每天打字练习，以展示细节。

例: I improve my typing by practising every day. I use online typing exercises and set aside about 20 minutes each morning to do drills and speed tests.

× I prefer handwriting because when I was a child I start handwriting every day.

✓ I prefer handwriting because when I was a child I started handwriting every day.

错误类型: 现在/过去时使用不当。句子中有时间状语“when I was a child”（表示过去），主句“start”应使用过去式“started”。建议：遇到表示过去的时间状语时，把动词改为过去式。

× I use laptop keyboard every day because my laptop keyboard is really portable and I didn't have a desktop on one.

✓ I use a laptop keyboard every day because my laptop keyboard is really portable and I didn't have a desktop.

错误类型: 冠词和多余短语问题。① “laptop keyboard” 前需不定冠词“a”。② 句尾“on one”是多余且不自然，应删除。建议：名词单数通常需要冠词；避免使用不必要的短语。

× When I was a 5 year old child, my father buy a laptop so that time I start to study how to type on a keyboard.

✓ When I was a 5-year-old child, my father bought a laptop, so at that time I started to learn how to type on a keyboard.

错误类型: 过去时使用不当与词形及短语顺序问题。句中涉及过去时间，应将动词“buy”和“start”改为过去式“bought”和“started”；“5 year old”作定语应写成“5-year-old”；“so that time”不自然，应改为“so at that time”或直接“so”。另外“study how to type”通常用“learn how to type”。建议：描述过去事件时全部动词用过去式，注意复合形容词连字符及固定短语用法。

× Just practice in every day.

✓ I just practice every day.

错误类型: 动词和副词位置及介词误用。原句中“practice”作为动词，前面需主语“I”；短语“in every day”不正确，应为“every day”或“daily”。建议：用“I just practice every day.” 或 “I practice daily.” 并保证句子有主语。