Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 불분명하고 반복적인 음성과 망설임이 많습니다. 먼저 질문에 직접적으로 답한 뒤(주제 문장), 이유를 1~2개의 구체적인 근거로 설명하세요. 불필요한 충고사(uh, umm 등)를 줄이고 문장을 간결하게 만드세요. 또한 'more easier'와 같은 중복 비교 표현을 고치고, 'handwriting is a pain'와 같은 구어체 표현 대신 명확한 표현을 쓰세요. 예: 주제문 → 이유(속도, 편리성) → 간단한 예 순으로 구성하세요.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is much faster and more convenient. For example, when I take notes or write reports I can edit and reorganize text quickly. Also, typing helps me keep my work neat and searchable, which saves time later.

提案: 대체로 의미는 전달되지만 문법과 어휘 선택에서 오류가 있습니다('usually the computer' 등). 답변은 명확한 주제문으로 시작하고, 구체적 상황(데스크탑 혹은 노트북, 어떤 작업을 하는지)을 예로 들어 설명하세요. 연결어를 사용해 흐름을 자연스럽게 하세요. 또한 간결하게 2~3문장으로 마무리하세요.

例: Yes, I type every day, mainly on a laptop because I often work outside the office. As a researcher I type data, reports and emails, and the laptop lets me work flexibly in the lab or at home.

提案: 시간 표현과 문장 구조가 부정확합니다('seven or eight years old'는 나이인지 몇 년 전에 배웠는지 모호). 연령을 말할 때는 'when I was seven or eight'처럼 정확히 표현하세요. 또한 'I usually use the computer on webtoon or computer'는 의미가 불분명하므로 무엇을 했는지(예: 게임, 인터넷, 웹툰 보기) 구체적으로 말하세요. 망설임 줄이고 2~3문장으로 정리하세요.

例: I learned to type when I was about seven or eight years old. I mostly taught myself by using the computer at home to read webtoons and do simple tasks, so I practiced typing naturally while using the internet.

提案: 의도가 보이지만 문법과 문장 연결이 어색합니다('writing paper'가 구체적이지 않음, 'The improvement improve the typing' 같은 오류). 개선 방법을 구체적으로 하나 또는 두 가지로 제시하고, 어떻게 도움이 되었는지 예를 들어 설명하세요. 연결어(For example, In addition)를 사용해 문장을 매끄럽게 만드세요.

例: I improve my typing mainly by practicing writing papers and doing regular typing exercises. For example, while I was a graduate student I typed long reports and drafts, which helped me increase speed and accuracy over time.

× typing is more easier rather than handwriting

✓ typing is easier than handwriting

The comparative 'more easier' is incorrect because 'easier' already is the comparative form of 'easy'. Use 'than' to compare two items, not 'rather than' in this structure. Suggestion: use 'easier than' for direct comparisons (e.g., 'typing is easier than handwriting').

× when I do handwriting, I guess, umm. Pain in my.

✓ when I handwrite, I guess it causes me pain

'Do handwriting' is unnatural; use the verb 'handwrite'. The second fragment 'Pain in my' is incomplete and lacks a subject and verb. Combine into a complete sentence: 'it causes me pain' or 'my hand hurts'. Suggestion: form a full clause with subject + verb for clarity.

× Oh definitely yes. Personally I am a researcher so I usually the computer in my working time.

✓ Oh definitely yes. Personally, I am a researcher, so I usually use the computer during work hours

The original misses the verb 'use' after 'usually' and uses awkward phrase 'in my working time'. Correct verb is required and 'during work hours' or 'while working' is idiomatic. Suggestion: include necessary verbs and use common time expressions.

× So when I organize some data I usually type through the computer

✓ So when I organize data I usually type on the computer

The preposition 'through' is not correct for using a device; use 'on' or 'using' the computer. Also 'some data' can be 'data' without 'some'. Suggestion: say 'type on the computer'.

× I don't remember exactly, but it was, uh, seven or eight years old.

✓ I don't remember exactly, but I was about seven or eight years old

Use 'I was seven or eight years old' to indicate age in the past; 'it was seven or eight years old' incorrectly uses 'it' and the verb. Suggestion: use 'I was about...' for past age.

× I usually use the computer on webtoon or computer

✓ I usually use the computer to read webtoons or for other computer activities

The phrase 'on webtoon or computer' is unclear and uses wrong preposition. Use 'to read webtoons' or 'for' plus noun. Suggestion: specify the activity and use correct prepositions ('to read', 'on the web').

× There are several cases in my life, but I should say writing paper is the best approach.

✓ There have been several situations in my life, but I would say writing on paper is the best approach

'There are several cases in my life' is unnatural; 'have been several situations' fits past experience. 'writing paper' should be 'writing on paper' or 'writing papers' depending on meaning. Suggestion: use 'writing on paper' for the activity of handwriting.

× The improvement improve the typing.

✓ This improved my typing

The original is redundant and ungrammatical ('The improvement improve'). Use a subject and past tense verb to describe result: 'This improved my typing' or 'It improved my typing'. Suggestion: use concise subject + verb structure.

× It is really helpful for me when I was a graduate student.

✓ It was really helpful for me when I was a graduate student

The time clause 'when I was a graduate student' refers to the past, so the main verb should be past tense 'was' instead of present 'is'. Suggestion: match tense to the time reference.