Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be concise and clear. Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g., "I prefer typing") then give one or two specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid vague phrases like "less amount of time" and unclear references such as "muscle movement."

例: I prefer typing. It is faster than handwriting, so I can finish writing tasks more quickly, and typing is less tiring for my hand because my fingers move easily across the keys.

提案: This is a good direct answer. To improve, add one brief supporting detail with a linking word to sound more natural and informative. Keep it to one short sentence more.

例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because it is portable and I can work from anywhere.

提案: Give a clear time reference and a concise description of how you learned. Use a topic sentence (e.g., "I learned to type when...") and one or two coherent supporting details with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid confusing fragments and repetition.

例: I learned to type when I was a teenager. Gradually, I improved by watching others type and practicing regularly, and over time I became more confident and accurate.

提案: Provide a fuller answer: start with a topic sentence and include specific methods and a linking word to explain. Mention frequency or tools to make the answer concrete and natural.

例: I improve my typing by practicing for 15–20 minutes every day and using online typing exercises to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing because it gives a less amount of time and there will be so much of muscle movement where our fingers can easily.

✓ I prefer typing because it takes less time and involves less muscle movement in our fingers.

The original uses incorrect and awkward quantifiers and phrasing ('gives a less amount of time', 'so much of muscle movement where our fingers can easily'). Use 'takes less time' to express duration and 'involves less muscle movement' to correctly quantify and describe physical effort. Also simplified wording improves clarity.

× I type on a laptop keyboard every day.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day.

This sentence is already grammatically correct. It uses the present simple appropriately for a habitual action; no change is needed.

× I didn't learn about height, how to type a keyboard.

✓ I didn't learn the correct typing posture or how to type on a keyboard.

The original is unclear and missing appropriate nouns and prepositions. 'Didn't learn' correctly marks past negation, but 'about height' is vague; use 'typing posture' and include the preposition 'on' with 'keyboard' to clarify object.

× I learned it gradually by watching other typing on a keyboard.

✓ I learned gradually by watching others typing on a keyboard.

Use the gerund 'typing' after the verb 'watching'. Also 'other' should be plural 'others' to refer to other people. 'By watching others typing' correctly expresses the means by which learning occurred.

× Why? Why I cannot.

✓ I wondered why I couldn't.

The original consists of fragmented questions that do not fit the context. Combining them into a single past-tense reported thought 'I wondered why I couldn't' fits the narrative and corrects word order and contraction for natural speech.

× And by getting so much of conscious believe in myself, I gain so much gain on those things which I'm doing it now.

✓ By becoming more confident in myself, I have made a lot of progress in the things I'm doing now.

The original misuses nouns and adjectives ('conscious believe', 'so much gain') and repeats words awkwardly. Replace with 'more confident' (adjective) and 'made a lot of progress' (accurate verb phrase). Remove redundant 'it' after 'doing'. Maintain present perfect 'have made' to connect past improvement to the present.

× By practicing the typing, practicing.

✓ By practicing typing.

'Practice' followed by a gerund 'typing' is correct; 'the typing' is unnecessary. Repetition is redundant. Use concise gerund phrase 'By practicing typing' to answer how you improve typing.