Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接且自然，但表达较简单，有重复（不喜欢打字 / 喜欢买漂亮的笔）。建议在主题句后用1–2句具体说明原因或场景，并使用连接词，使回答更丰富且有逻辑。例如说明什么时候喜欢手写、手写带来的好处或对比打字的缺点。注意句子简洁不超过五句。

例: I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and helps me focus. For example, I write notes and letters with fountain pens, which makes the process enjoyable. Compared with typing, handwriting helps me remember information better.

提案: 回答有主题句但句子不够自然且有语法问题（“too heavy to me”、“Used it everywhere”）。建议保持一到两句，使用连接词解释原因或场景，并修正语法。可补充具体使用场合（如工作或学习）。

例: I type on a desktop every day because I find it more comfortable and stable. I usually use it at my desk for studying and doing assignments, while I avoid laptops since I prefer a larger screen and a full keyboard.

提案: 回答基本完整，时间顺序清楚，但表达略显冗长且有小错误（“in that time”）。建议用连接词（e.g. then, later）使句子更流畅，并提供更具体的细节（例如大概年龄或练习方法）。保持不超过五句。

例: I learned to type on a keyboard in primary school, and my speed improved in junior high. Back then I practised a lot by chatting with friends on WeChat, which helped me become faster and more accurate.

提案: 回答直接但缺少多样性和具体方法（只说大量打字）。建议补充具体练习方式或工具，如打字软件、练习时长、练习目标，并使用连接词说明效果。这样更具体也更有说服力。

例: I improve my typing by practising regularly online with typing exercises and by messaging friends on WeChat. I also use a typing tutor app for 15–20 minutes a day to work on accuracy and speed.

× I prefer handwriting because I don't like typing on the computer.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I don't like typing on the computer.

句子本身语法正确，但可更自然地说成 “typing on a computer” 或 “typing on my computer”。原句使用定冠词“the”不是严格错误，但在自然表达中常用不定冠词或所有格。建议：根据具体语境选择“a computer”或“my computer”。

× I like buying some beautiful pens and pencils to write on papers.

✓ I like buying beautiful pens and pencils to write on paper.

“papers” 用法不当。英语中表示书写材料通常用不可数名词“paper”，而不是复数可数“papers”。此外“some beautiful”可以简化为“beautiful”。建议：将“papers”改为不可数名词“paper”。

× I type on the desktop every day because I think laptop is too heavy to me.

✓ I type on the desktop every day because I think the laptop is too heavy for me.

缺少定冠词“the”修饰“laptop”，并且短语“too heavy to me”不自然，正确搭配为“too heavy for me”。建议：在可数单数名词前加冠词或所有格，并使用“too ... for ...”结构。

× Used it everywhere.

✓ I used it everywhere.

原句缺少主语，属于句子结构错误。完整句子需要主语“I”（或其他人称代词）。建议：补上主语并确保动词时态与前后文一致。

× I learned to type on the keyboard when I was in primary school, but I typed more quickly when I was in junior high school because in that time I often chatted with my friends on WeChat.

✓ I learned to type on the keyboard when I was in primary school, but I typed more quickly when I was in junior high school because at that time I often chatted with my friends on WeChat.

短语“in that time”不地道，应使用“at that time”表示过去特定时间点。句中时态（learned, typed, chatted）一致正确。建议：将“in that time”改为“at that time”。

× I improve my typing by spending a lot of time messaging friends on WeChat and typing on my computer.

✓ I improve my typing by spending a lot of time messaging friends on WeChat and typing on my computer.

句子语法正确，时态和动名词使用恰当。作为建议，可改为更自然的表达如“I improve my typing by practicing on my computer and messaging friends on WeChat.” 但原句符合语法规则。