Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason with a linking word. Avoid redundancy and correct basic errors (e.g., "more easier" -> "easier", "I'm my handwriting" -> "my handwriting is"). Keep to no more than 3–4 short sentences.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is easier and faster. For example, when I write essays I can edit and format my work quickly. Also, my handwriting is messy, so typed text looks neater.

提案: Answer directly, use correct verbs and avoid repetition. Start with the main point (desktop), then give one or two specific reasons using linking words like "because" or "so". Avoid phrases like "adapt on."

例: I use a desktop keyboard every day because I play computer games and write essays there. I also practice English on websites, so the desktop is more comfortable for longer typing sessions.

提案: Use the correct tense and clear time expressions. If you learned in the past, use simple past or give a duration with present perfect correctly. Provide one clear time reference and a brief supporting detail.

例: I started learning to type when I was a child, about five years ago. Since then I have practiced regularly, especially for school assignments.

提案: Be specific about methods you use to improve. Use clearer structure: topic sentence + one or two specific activities with linking words (e.g., "for example", "by"). Avoid vague phrases like "like as everyone."

例: I improve my typing by practicing daily on typing websites and by doing essays. For example, I use online typing tests to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing because it's more easier and especially when I do essay and furthermore I'm my handwriting is awful so I would like to prefer typing rather than handwriting.

✓ I prefer typing because it's easier, especially when I write essays, and my handwriting is awful, so I prefer typing to handwriting.

Errors: 'more easier' is redundant; use 'easier'. 'do essay' uses incorrect verb and article; use 'write essays'. 'furthermore I'm my handwriting is awful' has extra words and wrong word order; correct to 'and my handwriting is awful'. 'would like to prefer' is awkward and redundant; simply use 'prefer' and 'prefer X to Y' for comparison. Suggestion: remove redundant 'more', use correct verb 'write', fix clause order, and use 'prefer ... to ...'.

× Yes, I always always adapt on a desktop keyboard because I play computer games every day and practice English on some different websites and do essays on there. That's all.

✓ Yes, I always use a desktop keyboard because I play computer games every day, practice English on various websites, and write essays there.

Errors: 'adapt on a desktop keyboard' is incorrect; likely meant 'use a desktop keyboard'. Preposition 'on there' is redundant and awkward; use 'there' or 'on those sites'. 'some different websites' is unnatural; use 'various websites'. Also 'do essays' should be 'write essays'. Suggestion: replace 'adapt on' with 'use', change 'do essays' to 'write essays', and simplify prepositional phrases.

× I have been learned that for five years I think and I since my childhood I started type on keyboard.

✓ I have been learning to type for five years, I think, and I started typing on a keyboard in my childhood.

Errors: 'have been learned' mixes active and passive/perfect continuous forms; correct is 'have been learning' for ongoing action. 'I started type' needs gerund 'typing'. Word order and time expressions: 'since my childhood I started' is contradictory (since suggests continuing); better: 'I started ... in my childhood' or 'I have been learning ... since my childhood'. Suggestion: choose correct tense and verb forms: 'have been learning' or 'started typing' with appropriate time phrases.

× Like as everyone just type something on keyboard and it's made some progress every day.

✓ Like everyone, I just type something on the keyboard and make some progress every day.

Errors: 'Like as everyone' is redundant; use 'Like everyone'. 'type' should be 'type' with subject agreement 'I type' or 'I just type'; original had subject missing. 'on keyboard' needs article 'the keyboard' or 'a keyboard'. 'it's made some progress' uses incorrect passive and subject; use active 'I make some progress'. Suggestion: simplify phrase, ensure subject-verb agreement, use correct articles and active voice.