Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the response more natural and concise. Begin with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct minor grammar (e.g., 'hand handwriting' → 'handwriting', 'in keyboard' → 'on a keyboard'), and give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and more comfortable for me. For example, typing on a keyboard helps me finish notes and assignments more quickly, so I often choose it when I need to save time.

提案: Start with a direct answer and combine repetitive points into one clear sentence. Fix grammar and word choice (e.g., 'in my laptop keyboard' → 'on my laptop', 'I'm interested in in my study purpose' is unclear). Include one supporting detail about what you use the laptop for, using a linking word.

例: Yes, I type on my laptop every day. I mainly use it for my studies, for example to research information and type up assignments, so I spend several hours on it daily.

提案: Give a grammatically correct, concise answer and add a brief context if helpful. Correct subject-verb agreement ('I were'→'I was') and prepositions ('on keyboard'→'on a keyboard'). One or two concise sentences are enough.

例: I learned to type on a keyboard when I was 14, after my parents bought me a laptop. I practiced regularly on that computer until I became comfortable typing.

提案: Provide a clear structure: state methods you use to improve, then give a specific example. Avoid repetition and awkward phrases ('spend a lot of time ahead of the laptop' → 'spend a lot of time on my laptop'). Mention a particular website or type of practice for concreteness.

例: I improve my typing by practicing on online typing websites and by typing my college assignments regularly. For example, I use a typing tutor site for 15 minutes a day to practice accuracy and speed, and then apply what I learn when I write essays.

× Actually I prefer typing rather than hand handwriting because I feel comfortable when I type in keyboard.

✓ Actually I prefer typing to handwriting because I feel comfortable when I type on the keyboard.

Use of comparative with rather than is awkward; prefer takes to. 'hand handwriting' is redundant; use 'handwriting'. Preposition with keyboard is 'on', not 'in'. Also include article 'the' before keyboard when referring to a specific device.

× It's very relaxing or I think it's saved my time that's why I choose or I prefer typing.

✓ It's very relaxing, and I think it saves me time; that's why I choose typing.

Tense and verb form issues: 'it's saved my time' is wrong—use simple present 'saves' to express a general truth. Use parallel connectors: 'and' instead of 'or' here. 'I choose or I prefer typing' is repetitive; 'that's why I choose typing' is clearer.

× Yes I do. I have a laptop and I type regularly in my laptop keyboard every day.

✓ Yes, I do. I have a laptop and I type regularly on my laptop's keyboard every day.

Preposition should be 'on', not 'in'. Use possessive form 'my laptop's keyboard' or 'the laptop keyboard'. Add commas for natural pauses.

× I'm interested in in my study purpose.

✓ I use it for my studies.

Double 'in' is an error. The phrase 'interested in my study purpose' is unnatural; 'use it for my studies' conveys the intended meaning. Use 'for' to indicate purpose.

× I regularly use my laptop and also I complete my assignment by typing keyboard.

✓ I regularly use my laptop, and I also complete my assignments by typing on the keyboard.

Pluralize 'assignment' to 'assignments' for general habit. Use 'typing on the keyboard' with preposition and article. Add ',', and reposition 'also' for natural flow.

× When I were 14 years old, the time I brought a laptop and this time I learned how to type on keyboard.

✓ When I was 14 years old, I bought a laptop, and at that time I learned how to type on the keyboard.

Use 'was' not 'were' with singular 'I'. 'Brought' is wrong verb—should be 'bought' (purchase). Rephrase 'the time I brought a laptop and this time' to 'at that time'. Add article 'the' before 'keyboard'.

× Actually, I practice in a website.

✓ Actually, I practice on a website.

Use preposition 'on' with 'website', not 'in'.

× I practiced a lot in a website and also I'm, I do my college assignment and also I spend a lot of time ahead of the laptop.

✓ I practiced a lot on a website, and I also do my college assignments and spend a lot of time in front of the laptop.

Use 'on' with website. Maintain parallel structure and correct present simple for habitual actions: 'I do' and 'spend'. 'Ahead of the laptop' is incorrect; use 'in front of the laptop'. Also pluralize 'assignments' for generality.

× That's why I improve my typing.

✓ That's why my typing has improved.

For a change resulting from ongoing actions, present perfect 'has improved' is more natural. 'I improve my typing' sounds like a habitual action; context suggests improvement has occurred.