Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammar (tense and prepositions), reduce redundancy, and add a clearer topic sentence with one supporting reason using linking words. Keep answers to 2–3 concise sentences.

例: I used to prefer handwriting, but recently I much prefer typing because it is faster and more comfortable. For example, typing is neater and easier to edit, so I make fewer mistakes.

提案: Use present simple for habitual actions, avoid vague phrases and redundancy, and provide one specific benefit with a linking word for coherence.

例: I usually type on my personal laptop because it is convenient and I can access my files anywhere. For instance, I store photos and documents on the laptop so they are backed up and easy to find.

提案: Correct tense and phrasing (use past simple or present perfect), remove repetition, and give a clear time reference plus a brief description of how you practised using linking words.

例: I learned to type when I was a teenager and practised whenever I had free time. For example, I typed emails and short essays on my laptop regularly, which helped me improve.

提案: Use present simple for current habits, be more specific about practice methods, and avoid repeating phrases. Include one concrete example of a method and its result using a linking word.

例: I improve my typing by practising daily with online typing exercises and getting tips from my brother. For instance, after following timed drills for a month, my speed increased and I make fewer errors.

× In the past I prefer handwriting, but recently I'm so addicted in typing because I feel comfortable in typing rather than doing handwriting.

✓ In the past I preferred handwriting, but recently I've become so addicted to typing because I feel more comfortable typing than handwriting.

The original mixes past and present incorrectly. 'Prefer' should be past 'preferred' to match 'In the past'. 'I'm so addicted in typing' is incorrect preposition and structure: use 'have become addicted to typing' or 'I've become so addicted to typing'. Also use comparative 'more comfortable typing than handwriting' and omit unnecessary gerunds. Suggestion: keep consistent tense (past for past habits, present perfect for recent changes) and use 'addicted to' rather than 'addicted in'. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× In handwriting we should be very careful about the cleanliness, but not in the typing.

✓ With handwriting we should be very careful about cleanliness, but not with typing.

Preposition 'in' is incorrect here; use 'with handwriting' and 'with typing' to contrast methods. Also remove the article 'the' before 'cleanliness' and 'typing' because they are uncountable or general. Suggestion: use 'with' for comparison of methods and avoid unnecessary articles. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× I used to type on my own personal laptop for a any kind of work because it will be very convenient and safe to reach at any time.

✓ I type on my personal laptop for any kind of work because it is very convenient and easy to access at any time.

'Used to' implies a past habit; context asks current daily use, so use present simple 'I type'. 'a any' is incorrect; use 'any'. 'will be' is wrong for general truth—use 'is'. 'safe to reach' is awkward; 'easy to access' or 'convenient to access' is better. Suggestion: match tense to habitual action and use correct determiners and verbs for general statements. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× For instance, I used to keep photos and paperwork or any type of document in my laptop which will be safer for long period of time.

✓ For instance, I keep photos, paperwork, and other documents on my laptop, which is safer for a long period of time.

Again 'used to' incorrectly suggests past; use present 'keep' for habitual action. Use 'on my laptop' rather than 'in'. 'Any type of document' can be simplified to 'other documents'. 'Which will be safer' should be 'which is safer' for a general truth. 'For long period of time' needs an article: 'for a long period of time'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions, articles, and present simple for routines. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× I used to learn how to use type on keyboard since long time period when I I have free time I used to type anything and keep going on practising on my laptop which provide me how to learn it.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard a long time ago; when I had free time I would type anything and kept practising on my laptop, which helped me learn.

The sentence mixes tenses and incorrect constructions. Use simple past 'learned' to indicate when you acquired the skill. 'Used to learn' is incorrect; 'learned' is appropriate. 'Since long time period' should be 'a long time ago'. 'When I I have free time' needs past 'had' and remove duplicate 'I'. 'Used to type' or 'would type' fits past habitual; then 'kept practising' is past. 'Which provide me how to learn it' is ungrammatical; use 'which helped me learn'. Suggestion: separate into clear clauses, use past tense consistently for past events, and use natural expressions like 'a long time ago' and 'helped me'. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× To improve my typing, I used to practice a lot in my free time and I used to get suggestions from my elders.

✓ To improve my typing, I practice a lot in my free time and get suggestions from my elders.

'Used to' suggests past habit; if describing current improvement methods, use present simple 'practice' and 'get'. Also 'elders' is acceptable but 'older family members' or 'my elders' is fine. Suggestion: use present simple for current routines and avoid 'used to' unless referring to past habits. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× For instance, my brother also helped me to improve my typing and to improve fast typing.

✓ For instance, my brother also helped me improve my typing and to type faster.

The phrase 'to improve fast typing' is awkward. Use 'to type faster' for clarity. After 'helped me' the bare infinitive or 'helped me to improve' both work; here 'helped me improve' is natural. Suggestion: use 'type faster' to express increased speed and simplify repeated 'improve'. Grammar problem type ID: 8