Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cải thiện: Rất tốt khi bạn trả lời trực tiếp. Tuy nhiên câu trả lời thiếu mạch lạc và có nhiều tiếng lấp đầy (uh, umm). Hãy dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, nối các ý bằng liên từ, và cung cấp một hoặc hai ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ lý do. Giữ tối đa 3-4 câu, sửa ngữ pháp (e.g., "handwriting makes me feel").

例: I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient for sending emails and messages. For example, I can quickly edit and share documents with classmates. In contrast, handwriting feels more personal but takes much longer and is harder to organize.

提案: Cải thiện: Trả lời ngắn gọn và phù hợp. Cần tránh tiếng lấp đầy và có thể mở rộng thêm một chi tiết cụ thể hoặc lợi ích để làm phong phú câu trả lời. Sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính rõ ràng và một liên từ nếu thêm chi tiết.

例: I type on a laptop every day because it is portable and easy to carry to school and work. Also, the laptop battery lasts long enough for my classes, so I can work without searching for a power outlet.

提案: Cải thiện: Câu trả lời đúng nhưng lặp từ và hơi vụng về. Nên nói ngắn gọn và có thể thêm một chi tiết về cách bạn học (e.g., lessons, practice) để làm câu trả lời cụ thể hơn. Tránh lặp lại cùng ý.

例: I learned to type when I was six years old. My parents enrolled me in basic computer lessons, and I practiced regularly with simple typing games.

提案: Cải thiện: Trả lời chứa nhiều tiếng lấp đầy và thiếu mạch lạc. Hãy tổ chức ý theo cấu trúc: chủ đề + 2-3 phương pháp cụ thể, dùng liên từ (for example, also) và nêu kết quả hoặc tần suất. Tránh lặp từ và hoàn thiện ngữ pháp (e.g., "I practice typing every day" not "practice it every day").

例: I improve my typing by practicing every day on online typing websites and games. For example, I use typing tutors to increase my speed and accuracy, and I also write short essays to practice real typing situations.

× To be honest, I prefer typing uh, It's a very convenient uh, and it is useful for uh, writing emails or chatting or chat with friends while handwriting make me feel uh appreciation.

✓ To be honest, I prefer typing. It's very convenient and useful for writing emails or chatting with friends, while handwriting makes me feel appreciative.

The original sentence has multiple issues: run-on sentence with incorrect conjunctions and coordination, and verb agreement. 'while handwriting make me feel uh appreciation' has subject-verb agreement error: 'handwriting' as a singular gerund requires 'makes', and 'appreciation' should be the adjective 'appreciative' to describe feeling. Also remove filler words 'uh' and redundant 'or chat' for clarity. Suggest breaking into two sentences and using correct verb form and adjective. Grammar problem type ID:16

× I type on laptop keyboard every day because the laptop is very convenient for me to bring to school or to work.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because the laptop is very convenient for me to bring to school or to work.

Missing article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard' causes unnatural phrasing; this is an article/subject phrase issue affecting agreement with the noun phrase. Add 'a' to make the noun phrase correct. Also 'type on a laptop keyboard' is the natural collocation. Grammar problem type ID:27

× I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was six years or six years old.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was six years old.

Redundant phrase 'six years or six years old' is incorrect. Use 'six years old' to indicate age. The error is misuse/redundancy of quantifier/time expression. Grammar problem type ID:14

× Umm, uh, I improve my typing, uh, by, uh, practice it every day.

✓ I improve my typing by practicing every day.

After 'by' a verb should take the -ing form (gerund). 'practice it' is incorrect; use 'practicing' and remove unnecessary 'it'. Also remove filler sounds. Grammar problem type ID:8

× I practice, uh, type.

✓ I practice typing.

Use the gerund 'typing' after 'practice' when referring to the activity. 'I practice, type' is ungrammatical. Grammar problem type ID:8

× I practice typing through uh, through, umm, learn on through learning online, online game and uh, writing my uh.

✓ I practice typing by learning online, playing online typing games, and writing regularly.

Preposition 'through' repeated and 'learn on through learning online' is incorrect. Use 'by' to introduce methods and parallel noun phrases: 'learning online', 'playing online typing games', 'writing regularly'. Also remove filler words. Grammar problem type ID:11