Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, correct grammar (e.g. 'rather than handwriting', 'it doesn't take'), and limit to up to 5 sentences. Add one specific reason or brief example for support and use a linking word.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is much faster and more convenient. For example, when I'm in a hurry I can quickly send messages or notes on my phone. Also, typing makes it easier to edit mistakes without rewriting the whole page.

提案: Make your answer direct and eliminate filler words. Use a clear topic sentence, one or two supporting reasons, and a linking word to connect ideas. Avoid repetition (e.g. 'I really') and small grammar fixes ('rather than on a desktop').

例: I type every day on my laptop keyboard because I carry my laptop everywhere and find it more comfortable. In addition, the laptop keyboard is compact and quieter, so it's better than using a desktop when I work in cafes.

提案: Give a clear time reference and realistic self-assessment. Avoid vague phrases ('like', 'professionalist', 'make my skill smart') and overstatements. Provide one brief supporting detail about how you learned and use a linking word to connect ideas.

例: I learned to type about two or three years ago when I bought my first laptop. Since then I practiced daily with typing exercises, so now I can type much faster and more accurately than before.

提案: Organize the answer with a clear topic sentence, reduce fillers, and give a specific example of the app or practice routine. Use linking words (e.g. 'first', 'then', 'as a result') and focus on measurable improvement if possible.

例: At first I struggled with typing, but then I found a typing app called TypingClub and practiced with it every day for 20 minutes. As a result, my speed increased from about 30 to 60 words per minute and my accuracy improved significantly.